In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books.
In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books.
The ways of getting the knowledge has differential source: it varies upon the attitude and preference upon the person’s. The speaker asserts that in the arena of television, reading a book to insight the knowledge is just a trivial one. People can gain ultimate knowledge by watching of television in comparisons to reading a book. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the author’s suggestions and argue that majority of the person’s prefers books rather than television in the search of their knowledge for three reasons.
To begin with, books provides the comprehensive knowledge of any subject matter. For instances, if we want to study about the structure of DNA, we can make detailed study in the book with its diagrammatic and well-labelled figure. We can make a complete study of any subject matter in a coherence way, which can be provided by book. However, in the television, it will generally give basic and superficial idea. The information that was delivered from the television cannot be revised and no longer retention, and, the foregrounded information in books can be retained for the longer period of time.
Of course, the people frequently suffered from the high eye related problems due to the harmful, blue and ultra-violent rays coming from the television. This will be detrimental to the student who have eye problems and especially suffered from the dryness of eyes. One of my friends, frequently used the lubricating eye drop for moisturizing of his eye during the watching of television. Morever, it makes enervated and dull, on long standing of these types of rays producing technology and today majority of the people were facing the eye problem and their vision has been decreasing. On long term these types of rays also causes the cancerous disease. The above example illustrates the defects of using of televisions or any technological devices on using it for a long period of time.
Every individual may not have the affordability of the television. Morever, it is also not portable everywhere. Thus, due to the affordability of books, it also can be preferred by the poor people and portability leads to it more convenient.
Of course, some argue that in our increasingly globalized world, television can provide can provides the knowledge in a visual pattern. However, isn’t that, why we should follow the comfort? If we do so, the knowledge or idea may not be comprehensive. Little knowledge is peril and may leads to the failure of our any work due to incomplete idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...any subject matter. For instances, if we want to study about the structure of DNA...
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...in books can be retained for the longer period of time. Of course, the people frequently suf...
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... the watching of television. Morever, it makes enervated and dull, on long standi...
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...ing technology and today majority of the people were facing the eye problem and t...
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Suggestion: period
...ological devices on using it for a long period of time. Every individual may not have the af...
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...lized world, television can provide can provides the knowledge in a visual pattern. Howe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05381165919 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03158996476 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486547085202 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8788578551 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379047122316 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115346357068 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17899478003 0.0758088955206 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270811571562 0.150359130593 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.330204881262 0.0667264976115 495% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.