An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The author's recommendation to allow access of doctor's record of treating similarly affected patients to an ailing patient in order to determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition seems valid. The ailing patient can benefit a lot from the doctor's report regarding that disease. By seeing his report the patient will be able to make sound decision whether he want his treatment form this doctor or not.
To begin with, this recommendation will also aid in maintaining proper records and treatments, which is performed to treat that disease, moreover, it will also help sundry doctor's to plumb the treatment based on the records. Maintaining a proper record file will help ailing patient to better understand the doctor way of treating that medical condition.
In addition, allowing access of such kind of information the ailing patient will build truest and confidence in the doctor. Doctor's record of treating that medical condition, in a way, is an placebo for the ailing patient. Suppose, if the ailing patient finds that medical condition in the doctor's report, he or she will be able to see the success rate, number of days it will take to recover from that medical condition and what re symptoms of that disease, it will help the ailing patient in analysing his/her situation and will be able to relate to the process and will actively more support the doctor in the process.
However, Allowing such information is not so benefical to the doctor's. There are chances that the patient have same symptoms of that medical condition, but it is entirely a new disease. It also not give chance to new doctor's to gain experience with that medical condition, as the patient will not prefer that doctor, because he / she don't have any experience in treating that medical condition.
In conclusion, it is wise decision to allow access of doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patient to the ailing patient, it will help patient trust the doctor in the treating that medical condition. Allowing such information will also help doctor's to compare their patients betterment rate than the previous one, and help analysing that medical condition better on different patients.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
The authors recommendation to allow access of docto...
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Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...report regarding that disease. By seeing his report the patient will be able to m...
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Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... able to make sound decision whether he want his treatment form this doctor or not. ...
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Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
... decision whether he want his treatment form this doctor or not. To begin with, t...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to ail' or 'ail'.
Suggestion: to ail; ail
...ntaining a proper record file will help ailing patient to better understand the doctor...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eating that medical condition, in a way, is an placebo for the ailing patient. Su...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...g that medical condition, in a way, is an placebo for the ailing patient. Suppose...
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Line 7, column 335, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ot prefer that doctor, because he / she dont have any experience in treating that me...
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Line 9, column 334, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to analyse' or 'analyse'.
Suggestion: to analyse; analyse
...nt rate than the previous one, and help analysing that medical condition better on differ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09641873278 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61938123852 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426997245179 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1830915292 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.307692308 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496467283803 0.243740707755 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238229879158 0.0831039109588 287% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144362321149 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328476618732 0.150359130593 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906801346807 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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