An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
It is critically important that there is a trust relationship between the patient and doctor. Personally, I believe that patients should not be given access to doctor's records of treating similarly affected patients. I feel this way for these reasons which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, doctors are already competent to treat the medical condition because they have earned the MBBS/MD degree. They have proved their competency in the past 5 or 7 years and that's why they have the degree so I feel that just by seeing how they have treated the previous cases we shouldn't judge them. For instance, if a skin specialist has treated a patient and as recommended to take some medications. If the patient has not taken the medications properly at on right time and has followed some other medications then the patient might document that the prescribed medication from the doctor didn't show any difference and in fact, it has worsened the situation. As a result, it would be documented that the mistake was done by the doctor and any patient with similar symptoms might not trust the doctor. In addition, this documentation does not tell the competency of the doctor. Accordingly, I think the doctor's record access should not be given to the patient.
Second of all, If it is true that the patients were given access to the record then this might weaken the trust relationship between the doctor and the patient. We all know that how important doctors were during the covid situation. It is important for us to believe in them so that they can treat us in the same way. For instance, if I trust my doctor and provide him all the details then he will be able to suggest medication accordingly.
On the other hand, if a patient is given access to the records then this can increase the confidence of the patient. For example, when my Grandfather was diagnosed with cancer. We were in search of a good doctor who can handle it smoothly. We searched for a lot of doctors on google and checked their previous success stories so with this we were confident that this particular doctor would treat cancer effectively. In addition, when we met him he was able to properly identify the symptoms and treated cancer effectively. Consequently, My grandfather got liberty from cancer.
On a conclusive note, I believe that records should be shared with the patients only for the complicated cases, and for the simple cases, it shouldn't be shared because patients might not provide the information scientifically and it can weaken the trust relationship between the patient and doctor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, if, second, similarly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, first of all, it is true, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83521444695 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71447487584 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422121896163 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0178681064 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.80952380952 5.21951772744 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351859780415 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12601362873 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966205460203 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228051123848 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786827846461 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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