An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may batter determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
I agree with the recommendation that an ailing patient should have easy to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. It should be fair for the patient that this doctor is able to cure me or can eliaviate my condition. Patient and their family worry about the treatment given by the doctor. This access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients will help them and give relief about the treatment.
As state before that patient should have easy access to doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. A life of a person is important for their family member. They have rights to know that which type of treatment is given to the patient. Now a day there are so many doctors are there that they don’t have the degree of doctor and still running the hospital. And this is business for them. They don't care about the patient life. They only know how to get money. So many cases in India registered like this. So that people now aware of this things. It should fair that doctor allow to access the similarly afflicted patient's record.
There must be a transparent talk between the doctor and patient that the disease can be cure or not. Sometimes doctor know that some types of disease can not be cure than after they admit the patient and make a long bill of their treatment. At last doctor told that now you have to go some where more bigger hospital we don't have instrument to handle this type of bad position of patient. So this should fair to patient's family that they know the success ration of doctor in this type of disease.
It is completely fair for both doctor and patient. Not all the people have that much money that they can spend for treatment of the patient. So I thing doctor should be transparent to the patient that this money will needed and the cure is there or not. Doctors are important for out society. They always helps us. Many hospital treat patient free.
By allowing the record of treatment may affect the doctor's practice. There are some disadvantages of this thing. Many doctor will use this facility for their hospital. Some trick and technique will be on the line for doctor. So in some cases it is not fair for the doctors. In sum of this statement i agree with that an ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Person's life is more important than money. So this can be fair for all to give access to the record. There is no such bad thing that "I" can see.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d give relief about the treatment. As state before that patient should have e...
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Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...al. And this is business for them. They dont care about the patient life. They only ...
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Line 4, column 551, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... like this. So that people now aware of this things. It should fair that doctor allo...
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Line 4, column 597, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'accessing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: accessing
...hings. It should fair that doctor allow to access the similarly afflicted patients record...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: SOME_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhere'?
Suggestion: somewhere
...ast doctor told that now you have to go some where more bigger hospital we dont have instr...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
...told that now you have to go some where more bigger hospital we dont have instrument to han...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o go some where more bigger hospital we dont have instrument to handle this type of ...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'instrumented'.
Suggestion: instrumented
...where more bigger hospital we dont have instrument to handle this type of bad position of ...
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Line 10, column 147, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...pend for treatment of the patient. So I thing doctor should be transparent to the pat...
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Line 10, column 218, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...ent to the patient that this money will needed and the cure is there or not. Doctors a...
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Line 10, column 306, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... important for out society. They always helps us. Many hospital treat patient free. ...
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Line 10, column 330, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'treats'.
Suggestion: treats
...ty. They always helps us. Many hospital treat patient free. By allowing the rec...
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Line 13, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun doctor seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many doctors'.
Suggestion: Many doctors
...e are some disadvantages of this thing. Many doctor will use this facility for their hospit...
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Line 13, column 300, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r the doctors. In sum of this statement i agree with that an ailing patient shoul...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237424547284 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.15291750503 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0643863179074 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0503018108652 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0643863179074 0.0444667217837 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.122736418511 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0301810865191 0.0406280797675 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31412274574 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0301810865191 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.00201207243461 0.0016655270985 121% => OK
Determiners: 0.108651911469 0.0997080785238 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0382293762575 0.0249443105267 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00804828973843 0.0148568991511 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2551.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 454.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61894273128 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299559471366 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193832599119 0.280924506359 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129955947137 0.200843997647 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0859030837004 0.132149295362 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31412274574 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.367841409692 0.48968727796 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.4091300124 55.4138127331 73% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6194690265 160% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7575757576 23.380412469 59% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9471163195 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.303030303 141.124799967 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7575757576 23.380412469 59% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 0.674092028746 27% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 33.1408356695 51.4728631049 64% => OK
Elegance: 1.45864661654 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498967300059 0.391690518653 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104003605091 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0995223247149 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.417371182264 0.547984918172 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155646703724 0.149214159877 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163336379042 0.161403998019 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131880394325 0.0892212321368 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.497337574698 0.385218514788 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0233159410041 0.0692045440612 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376635631634 0.275328986314 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947604619362 0.0653680567796 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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