All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
We all know parents should spend a considerable amount of time, regularly, with their child. They are the best teachers. It has been observed that, children who do not get their parents’ attention at an early age are prone to picking up, during their adolescence, habits that are not approved by society. But in today’s world, everyone is very busy with their own business or job. Late office hours and frequent travels have made it difficult for the families to meet at the dining table.
The topic at context doesn’t talk about parents’ involvement at home, but very specifically their spending time at the child’s school. We go to our kid’s schools only when summoned for a parent-teacher meeting, probably twice or thrice in a year. However, visiting the school should be more frequent for several reasons.
Childhood is the first stage of social development. A parent must always keep an eye on how the child is shaping up and whether he or she needs some support or a change in course. Schools take up a big chunk of the childhood days. If we frequently visit the school, talk to the teachers about the kid’s progress, weakness etc, we can make ourselves aware of any potential issues that need to be taken care. We can take actions at an early stage, instead of waiting till end of year, before something goes seriously wrong.
Going to the school with your son or daughter makes them feel homely. Often there will be bullies about whom your kid may be afraid of, or a frightening history teacher. Presence of father or mother can bolster confidence in the child’s mind.
Occasional school visits also will open before you the doors to other guardians. The guardians get a chance to meet each other, discus issues they are facing, and can take joint steps to address them. It may be about approving an educational tour arranged by the school, or handling any grievance about the school authority or about a particular teacher.
Looking at the parent’s side too, it is always very pleasant to be in company of a large number of small children, full with fresh energy, shouting discordantly or running meaninglessly. This puts fresh oxygen inside us, and enhances our quality of life. So it is always advisable to spend more time with your kid and in his or her school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 87, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lways very pleasant to be in company of a large number of small children, full with fresh energy,...
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Line 6, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with your kid and in his or her school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86146095718 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72394582258 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612090680101 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4623761462 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0454545455 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16539240892 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460267815032 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063626758165 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884016068351 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633045160344 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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