All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.Write a response in which you discu

Companies all around the world want to maximise their profits and to do that one of the necessary requirements is efficient working. There are a plethora of consulting firms that specialize in the efficient working of the system and do have a lot of necessary experience and expertise required to bridge the lacuna between the efficient working of the company. The major factors that govern these include the unbiased nature, the meticulous analysis as well as the necessary expertise for the application of necessary systems to reach the goal of increasing company efficiency.

Such consultancy firms that help increase efficiency are known to be unbiased and take a thorough and critical analysis of the company workings and business models which helps them evaluate different aspect that have been left ignored and hence work towards their better utillizations. On the other hand, workers tend to have a biased and a parochial view of the company usually confined to the department that they are working for rather than the company as a whole.

Although it is crucial to get employee feedback and work on them, but, it often hampers the performance of the employees as they are more concerned in the dealings rather than completing jobs which will infact hamper overall efficiency rather than augmenting it. Moreover consultancy companies always pay a lot of attention to employee suggestions since it is them who are affected by the decisions suggested by the consultants. Hence, it should be handled by consultants who are actually paid for the meticulous evaluation of company trends, employee feedback as well as company practices and to provide solutions for better growth and efficiency of the company as a whole.

Consultants that aim to help companies have a lot of expertise,knowledge as well as the necessary experience about what could work in the market as well as the necessary steps and procedures required to achieve the desired output that they have been hired for. They can also be held accountable for their services whereas the suggestions by employees hold no such ground for success.

Owing to all these factor i firmly believe that although employee feedback is necessary for the growth of a company and to increase worker morale it is necessary to have professionals working to help increase the efficiency of these companies.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: , knowledge
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Suggestion:
...ease the efficiency of these companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15885416667 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89743356378 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466145833333 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3022051271 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.090909091 118.986275619 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.9090909091 23.4991977007 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 5.21951772744 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247336296446 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110851628617 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517817257484 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147473532605 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052308647489 0.0667264976115 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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