Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In today's world a leader influences millions of people . Thus, making leaders characteristics an important matter. That said , the ability of being able to make a moral judgement is a more important characteristic than maintaining the respect of ones peers.
A leader not only leads millions of the people but also inspires and influences them to make right decisions . Thus, it is very important for a leader to be able to make sound moral decisions as the actions taken by a leader can have major long lasting consequences . For example, Mahatma Gandhi made a judgement to take the route of non-violence to free India from the British . Had he decided to do the opposite he would have inspired violence among millions of Indians , which would have led to a lot of bloodshed. Therefore , it is important to make moral judgment at the cost of maintaining respect amongst your peers.
Also , a leader who is able to make judgments that are not influenced by bias ,will end up making right decisions . Thus making him successful . This in turn will cause his peers to not only to respect him but also adopt his moral ways. Hilter as a leader adopted a lot of immoral principles for which he was deeply respected by his followers . This kind of bad influence led to the death of millions of Jew. Hence proving, moral judgement is more important the respect .
Although, a leader should not fully compromise his respect when making a moral judgment .
In conclusion , a leader should be able to make a sound judgments as his actions will influence a lot of people around him . Thus, the ability of making moral judgement is more important than maintain the respect amongst peers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84668989547 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72655529329 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466898954704 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0079575729 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8235294118 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 64.0 7.80617977528 820% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299316195561 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116062130642 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833743295564 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215419482566 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046903247898 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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