Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leadership is the quality of being an individual with the ability to make his fellow mates(whoever is under the shade of his umbrella) motivated, makes them realize their true potential and guiding them towards achieving it. When talking about whether moral judgment is an important characteristic or the ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers is dependable upon the situation at hand.
To begin, Leader has to be a person with a very broad vision and should be able to guide his fellow peers with motivation, inspiration as well as critisicm even to the point of reparamand. Their are plethora of examples where an employee or a student being criticized for an idea or work, emerged out to be the 2.0 version of themself and had achieved outcomes which they believed to be impossible. For instance, I was working in a market research company as a research analyst. Stepping out of my confined boundries of doing research and creating report, I started ideating about the advanced marketing with an implemention of Artificial Intelligence and data analytics regarding which I did not had any conventional traning or certification. I prepared my pitch and presented it to the CEO, to my dissapointment he was not at att moved by my idea and criticized me for not doing my job instead wasting time on some fictional idea to boast companies revenue. Although this turned out to be a moment of bliss, criticizm served as a catatlyst forcing me to learn Artificial Intelligence as well as data analytics by my own and I started my own project just because of the burning desire to prove my point to the CEO. At last I succesuffuly created my project, this time presenting it to the board of directors, they got excited and implemented my project for companies growth he next day. It made me realized that a CEO criticizm has made me to achieve these results, On the other hand if i would have received moral judgement this project would have never came to life.
Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers is highly dependable on the situation. Sometimes being moral is the best option, while a leader should also be able to criticize is a good way which may push an individual to achieve unexpected results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, as to, for instance, talking about, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80835380835 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93322464953 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.506495962 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.083333333 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9166666667 23.4991977007 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244192753465 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10857596266 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161435971332 0.0758088955206 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253289786178 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169664561038 0.0667264976115 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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