The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement presents a view that I would agree is succesfull most of the time, but one that I cannot fully support due to its "all or nothing" impression it gives.
To begin, In society generally it is observed that, the people who have significantly raised their standards of livings from where they initially started in their childhood have credited their rough start as a motivate. Many individuals, whose childhood was in poverty or middle class families have generally ascended and have developed better standards for themselves. Generally, The main factor which drove them towards this dream of having a better lives, Developed due the limited resources which they had initially. Even I belong to a middleclass family, And in my personal experience this limited resources have crushed many of my dreams and my desire, Although it didn't served as a negative ingreadient in my recipy and has prompted, motivated me to work hard and earn a better living for me as well as my family.
Plethora of Individuals have raised their living standards due to their initail tough beginnning. For instance, Google's new CEO Sundar Pichai is a person whose father was a clerk and mother being a housewife had very limited resources which served as a motivation for him to work hard and today he is an emminent example and a motivation for many people in similar circumstances.
However, It cannot be fully agree that if a person who had a luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent them from developing into truly strong and independent individual. An individual in an luxurious enviroment will certainly have the resources at their desposial which can serve as their development. An individual with resources can opt for various classes and sports clubs which can enhance their skills and leadership abilits, Significantly contrubuting in their development of strong Induvidual. For instance, An well know business tycoon Ratan Tata was born is a rich family and a prosporous enviroment, Dose it attributed towards the negative side and deterioated his development as an Individual? No, he is an example of generosity and an avid phelanthropist try to help everyone within his umbrella.
Some may argue that luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals but suerly we all have seen the potential error of believing it to the extreme.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...; impression it gives. To begin, In society generally it is observed that, t...
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...hood have credited their rough start as a motivate. Many individuals, whose childhood was ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...of my dreams and my desire, Although it didnt served as a negative ingreadient in my ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ndependent individual. An individual in an luxurious enviroment will certainly hav...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...yone within his umbrella. Some may argue that luxuries and conveniences of conte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22646310433 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02081387171 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529262086514 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.086137102 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2307692308 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18460698651 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777902583526 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958330473695 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115840475928 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918055177628 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.