"In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field."
Experience is most important part of success. Without experience, it is similar to learn swimming by reading a book. With experience you can make a very good contribution in relevant field. Having information about past works will make future investigations more time effective. I agree with the statement that a person cannot give an remarkable contribution in the field without using its past experience. My opinion is discussed here after.
In today’s world, with advancement of science and technology there are many new field is generated in which a person can give their contribution. For each and every field, to make some new thing or to do a new research basic rules and science is same for entire technology. Right brother have invented airplane. Today's Boing-707, Airbus-380, and many other fighter plane work on same principle as airplane worked which developed by right brother. Without knowing basic concept of Aerospace Engineering a person cannot make any contribution to that field. Same thing can also applied to Automobile industries.
Furthermore, for a new invention also it is necessary to know subject in deep. With superficial knowledge of subject a person cannot give a remarkable contribution to that subject.as stated above for invention of airplane right brother may have past experience of mechanical engineering and knowledge of fluid mechanics. With combination of that two field, Right brother have invented airplane. So for today if any engineer want to design an air taxi then he must consider basic principle of aerospace engineering. Without knowing this he cannot make design of Air taxi. Being influenced by past achievements can help professionals, companies, or entrepreneur to improve their ideas and products, and their business.
In addition to this past achievement is achieved by many trial and errors. From this person can learn to do many things what to do and what not for a new invention this is he or she can know by study of past researches. This research teach true meaning of failure and also teaches about person’s strength and weaknesses.
To make a long story short, all the above mentioned reasons lead me to the conclusion that it is impossible to make a significant impact on any field of endeavour without first being influenced by past achievements within that field because past achievements are inspiration for the scientist to define a new subject for their researches.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
...hout experience, it is similar to learn swimming by reading a book. With experience you ...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the statement that a person cannot give an remarkable contribution in the field wi...
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Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ribution in the field without using its past experience. My opinion is discussed here after. ...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...ience and technology there are many new field is generated in which a person can give...
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Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'apply'
Suggestion: apply
...tion to that field. Same thing can also applied to Automobile industries. Furtherm...
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Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ile industries. Furthermore, for a new invention also it is necessary to know subject in...
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Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...tion of airplane right brother may have past experience of mechanical engineering and knowledge...
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Line 13, column 53, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trial seems to be countable; consider using: 'many trials'.
Suggestion: many trials
...to this past achievement is achieved by many trial and errors. From this person can learn ...
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Line 13, column 151, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ny things what to do and what not for a new invention this is he or she can know by study of ...
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Line 17, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine a new subject for their researches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25888324873 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0280932292 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497461928934 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.4452637677 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1818181818 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77272727273 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258968373645 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739201603643 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910682009901 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171200447424 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113623493498 0.0667264976115 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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