In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field
In this issue essay, the author assumes that the only way to contribute in any field is first being influenced by past achievements within that field. There is no doubt that past achievements in any field motivates a person to do good in that field but it may not be possible in each case.
Furthermore, if there is not much achieved in any field in the past, it may also serve as a motivation and challenge for a person to do something great in that field. A person after having knowledge about that field came to know about its limitation and obstacles that are preventing any further progress in that field. It may act as motivation to contribute in that field and a person may initiate an effort in order to rectify those problems. For example, a scientist trying to develop a hybrid from fusing protoplasmic content of two different plant cells in laboratory will come up with any new technique that can help to do so which earlier was not there. It will save resources and better observation can be possible of any hybrid. Also any team who haven’t won any world cup in cricket may find it as a challenge to win current world cup in order to glorify their nation in the world and come up as a champion.
However, it may always not be the scenario that every people can advance in a field in which there is not much achieved in past. Past achievements can derive a person to do more refinement in current practicing techniques and methods. For instance, as a person if he/she has worked as a leader or as a worker in any small firm that turned out to be very successful in future, it will be easier to get motivated from past achievements of himself and initiate an effort to establish a similar firm on large scale.
So, it can be concluded that many-a-times a person may feel secure to initiate a step or invest in a field in which great things has been achieved earlier but some people may took it as a challenge if anything significant has not been previously achieved in any field in the past. This motivation can led to many beneficial finding in any field for its future progress.
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...y not be possible in each case. Furthermore, if there is not much achiev...
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...ervation can be possible of any hybrid. Also any team who haven't won any world...
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...orld and come up as a champion. However, it may always not be the scenar...
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...eld in which there is not much achieved in past. Past achievements can derive a person ...
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...m that turned out to be very successful in future, it will be easier to get motivated fro...
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...h a similar firm on large scale. So, it can be concluded that many-a-time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64127764128 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71735807674 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449631449631 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9179530065 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.307692308 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3076923077 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270058527623 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109041876114 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100388567836 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229100713358 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148555570475 0.0667264976115 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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