In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement asserts that, in all field of inquiry, the beginner is most likely than the expert to make important contributions, which is some sort of true. But in deeper analysis, it becomes evident that, beginners are always better than expert in that respect, is too much extreme statement to comply with, and that is why, I agree with the statement with some qualifications.
A young mind is full of exuberant spirit, and that positive attitude is the most important steering force to achieve any important breakthrough in the field of research or inquiry. Whereas, an expert always focuses on following the rule and try to get to the zenith with his age old conception toward a problem, a beginner is brave enough to defy conventional view, and that unconventional attitude can bring the success in critical situations. We all know that, with age, as we gather knowledge, that perception towards a problem often thwarts the development as we are confined by our conventional attitude. On the other hand, a beginner can think out of the box, as he is not confined to any specific view. That cognition ability makes the difference in most difficult conditions.
In contrast, we can not deny the fact that, experience comes at a cost and that is why in most of the cases we can not but to admire experience. A young mind may be an energetic one and have the ability to question conventional system, but also he does have a superficial understanding because of his little work in a field of research. But, an expert goes through thousand of hours or practice and brainstorming and that is why, in most of the case he can provide the best response towards a situation. Again, there are many difficult situations, when a veteran can provide an experienced solution, because he might have experienced that difficult situation before and knows how to act.
So, to conclude, we can not deny that, beginner have the potential to make important contribution, at the same time, w can not blindly assert that only they can make important contribution.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'whereas', 'in contrast', 'sort of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198979591837 0.240241500013 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.140306122449 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102040816327 0.0880659088768 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408163265306 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408163265306 0.0444667217837 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130102040816 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0127551020408 0.0406280797675 31% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.91713586119 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030612244898 0.030933414821 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.119897959184 0.0997080785238 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0280612244898 0.0249443105267 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178571428571 0.0148568991511 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2055.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 350.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87142857143 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265714285714 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202857142857 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14 0.132149295362 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91713586119 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522857142857 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 55.7970556648 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 29.1666666667 23.380412469 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1603225349 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.25 141.124799967 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 23.380412469 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 55.7380952381 51.4728631049 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.54022988506 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444412698294 0.391690518653 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135201148808 0.123202303941 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0561637856067 0.077325440228 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.623244966524 0.547984918172 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166008749035 0.149214159877 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226478597577 0.161403998019 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124441623779 0.0892212321368 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389414231277 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0889690614374 0.0692045440612 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319197676283 0.275328986314 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998790288868 0.0653680567796 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.