In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Its not always true that the beginner can make better contributions than the expert. Domain experts spend a lot of time in understanding their field, know the best tatics which works in their field. they is an huge opportunity to face real time scenarios and keep improving themselves by gaining more experience.
I would like to give actual example of software engineering. software engineers learn how to plan a project, what could be best design, better programming and testing practices only through experience. As the accumulate More and more experience they tend to mature and more complete.
However experts are little over cautious and it kind of stops them from making ground breaking innovations, Whereas an newbie who is not risk aware, want to try out new ideas without thinking too much about the success/failures. This attitude in youngster gives them an edge over experts who are used to monotonous thinking.
Typical mistakes done by Freshers in and domains is they are not very clear in deciding what will work. So they start trying random ideas, if it clicks it's going to huge success, otherwise disaster and creating bad reputation for the organisation. So youngsters need professional grooming to give them maturity.
To conclude, In most cases experts contribute more with huge success rate, at times newbies do create wonders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
Its not always true that the beginner can m...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...best tatics which works in their field. they is an huge opportunity to face real tim...
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Message: Use third-person plural verb with 'they': 'are', 'were'.
Suggestion: are; were
...tatics which works in their field. they is an huge opportunity to face real time s...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...tatics which works in their field. they is an huge opportunity to face real time s...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ics which works in their field. they is an huge opportunity to face real time scen...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Software
...actual example of software engineering. software engineers learn how to plan a project, ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...learn how to plan a project, what could be best design, better programming and testing ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g practices only through experience. As the accumulate More and more experience they tend to m...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tend to mature and more complete. However experts are little over cautious and it...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ng ground breaking innovations, Whereas an newbie who is not risk aware, want to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, whereas, kind of, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 2235.4752809 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 442.535393258 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23668639053 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80623134311 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.745562130178 0.4932671777 151% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 704.065955056 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.893058729 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229210188448 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876765290691 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665855048243 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11936491096 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613006977374 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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