Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
government is funding is always important for building infrastructures like roads, metro rails etc. faster commutation facilities results in reduced travel time and increased productivity at work which helps in achieving better economic growth of a country.
education is of paramount importance in shaping the future of country. Great educational Institutes like Schools, Universities needs lot of funding to setup their labs to carry out research and development and provide high standard of education.
metro residents are subjected to huge work related stress and they need ways to relax themselves. this is where Entertainment spots helps in reducing their stress levels. Movie theatres, shopping complex, Art Gallery, museums and Many Monuments can be created for recreation. Not only such facilities help citizens, but also it can attract foreign tourism and more revenue to government.
Sanitary systems like waste water treatment plants, drainage are of paramount importance in deciding health of residents. All building should have access to proper drainage system and waste water treatment plants to reduce water consumption which is becoming scarce these days. Recycling plants for house hold wastes helps in reducing the manufacturing of more and more plastics thereby saving our planet.
nature conservation is important for planet as well as country to have good supply of oxygen and lesser CO2 emission. Trees should be planted on road sides by Civic bodies, nature parks and lakes have to be constructed and maintained well to ensure proper Ecological balance. this will invite more birds and protects the habitat of other species in our planet.
Finally commercial infrastructures like Airport, Industrial Zones and Uninterrupted power supply are quintessential for attracting foreign investments to achieve better economic growth and build a stronger Nation. Everything is possible with financial support from Government. Cities with huge talent pools are heart of a country. Keeping them happy will enable the country to grow faster and prosperous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Government
government is funding is always important for buil...
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Suggestion: Education
...ter economic growth of a country. education is of paramount importance in shaping t...
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Suggestion: to set up
...ools, Universities needs lot of funding to setup their labs to carry out research and de...
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...ls, Universities needs lot of funding to setup their labs to carry out research a...
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Suggestion: Metro
...ovide high standard of education. metro residents are subjected to huge work re...
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...and they need ways to relax themselves. this is where Entertainment spots helps in r...
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Suggestion: Nature
...astics thereby saving our planet. nature conservation is important for planet as...
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...ll to ensure proper Ecological balance. this will invite more birds and protects the...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...t of other species in our planet. Finally commercial infrastructures like Airport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70926517572 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87184729128 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642172523962 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4628014405 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2777777778 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809563505524 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251354486493 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360183622495 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383373775734 0.150359130593 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245734092896 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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