Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A leader has a vision he wants to accomplish and the seeks the support of people to do so, not all people have the same vision and some even oppose his vision. So, true leaders should not be affected by every statement that is made against them or every comments he listens from people, opoosiition or media. The above statement is tells us this very idea that leaders shall not easily budge from their stands and I strongly adhere to the idealogy, the following reasons support my analogy on the topic presented.
Leaders need to present a mandate before the elections and the opinions of the masses are framed acoording to the manifestos and madates presented by these leaders. Based on these manifestos people judge who they are willing to elect and would serve for the development. If a leader later shifts from his ideals after being elected due to pressure from opposition and media it will create distrust among the majority and tarnish the reputation of the leader. For instance, A leader may preach about banning alcohol from his state in his mandate and the majority supported him in his endevaour and he gets elected and later due to castigation from media and opposition,it may prevent him from doing so as the alcohol sales in the state are a major source of taxtation as the state is famous for it wines and breweries. This shows how the leader changes his opinion due to little critisicm.
A fickle minded person can never be a true leader, he may be influenced by everything he hears and reads. Doing so will make it impossible to take decisions in his own accord. For example, if ia fickle minded ruler like Allaudhin Tuglaq is elected he may not be able to take decision, as Tuglaq changed his capital twice during his rule shifiting all his assests over long distances and then coming back to his orignal capital and being confounded about every decision he every took. He moved his capital only as people said the new capital will be more beautiful than the previous one. History is evidence that no fickle minded leader has ever been sucessful as they can't have a crystal clear judgement.
Shifts in popular opinions can curb the masses but should not affect the leader or ruler. Doing this will only make him look weak in the eyes of the public and torment his stature in the society. This will lead to the downfall of his whole hegemony. Some people may argue that leader should listen to the popular opinion once in while to see hwat the poeple really want, but this can then become a problem as he may listen to the opinion and it may not be lawfully correct to ensue it or it may start as wave where the poeple demand him to listen to them everytime making the functioning sluggish. The above points show how I support the given arguement and conclude that leaders should not be influenced by popular opiniond and work on their own accord in publice welfare.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...to castigation from media and opposition,it may prevent him from doing so as the al...
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Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... leader has ever been sucessful as they cant have a crystal clear judgement. Shif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, so, then, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2380.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63035019455 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33507129429 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488326848249 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0548529687 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.222222222 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115769546429 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478453232364 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258928232928 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758521919827 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179879830353 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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