Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The prompt states that any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little. I mostly agree with the satement for two reasons. However, in some cases, a leader, who is very much strict to own rule, will be inimical for the people.
Firstly, a leader need to have his or her own way to lead the followers. Public opinion, which are popular may not be effective for a particular case. For example, in case of national educational curriculum there are two way of development- one is to follow a common national curriclum and another is different curriculum for different regions. Government leaders of Bangladesh may follow the popular opinion that the diffents curriculums for different regions as country like India, Italy, America have this type of curriculum. However, in country like India a common curriculum is not effective as the country is so large that there is a lot of variation among the people from one state to another state, but in case of Bangladesh the case is not like that. There is a less variety of people, and the country is very small, so in this case just to follow the publich opinion will not be an effctive steps for the leaders of Bangladesh. The example shows us that popula opinion may not be effective in some cases. Thus, leaders should find out and follow the way which will vaible for their situation.
Secondly, for a particular puposes there are lot of popular opinion and those opinion are often random. To follow these random opinion will not be good decision for a leader. For example, in a country there are a lot of opinions about the way of ruling a country. Different persons have different opinions. Is it possible for a leader to follow each of the opinions? and are the opinions really helpful? In most of the cases no. Leader will follow the most effective and feasible way to solve a problem. The leaders need to have a group of specialists, who can help the leaders to show the exact way to follow. Therefore, a leader should not be influenced by the shift of popular opinion rather he or she should follow the most efficient and effective way.
However, to be stingent in own rule may alienate the follower of a leader. In some of the caes leader may not be correct. May be there is more effective way to solve a problem, which can be come out from a popular opinion. If an opinion is really an effective one, then leader must follow it. After all a leader works for the people, he or she cannot ignore the people.
In conclusion, sometimes, when leaders are very much strict to the own rule may not be an effective leader, but it is clear that a leader should not change his or her decision or steps just by the influence of the people. Therefore, any leader who is quickly and easily infuenced by changes in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as country 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...culums for different regions as country like India, Italy, America have this type of...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (America) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s as country like India, Italy, America have this type of curriculum. However, in co...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this opinion' or 'those opinions'?
Suggestion: this opinion; those opinions
...es there are lot of popular opinion and those opinion are often random. To follow these rando...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... leader to follow each of the opinions? and are the opinions really helpful? In mos...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...opinions really helpful? In most of the cases no. Leader will follow the most effect...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he cases no. Leader will follow the most effective and feasible way to solve a pr...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y alienate the follower of a leader. In some of the caes leader may not be correct. May be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, after all, for example, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62598425197 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51783581256 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.38188976378 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.9 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1502421462 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9285714286 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214131621333 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817383222684 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071713549936 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166636577816 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675968447488 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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