Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is
to move in the opposite direction---in other words, to make things as simple as possible.
Humans have evolved enough to create colossal structures such as tall buildings and gigantic statues and microscopic intricacies such as a microchips with millions of transistors on it spread just over a centimeter of area.
The author asserts that making things simpler requires substantial efforts and courage as compared to making them bigger and more complicated. I believe that the above statement can hold true or not depending upon
the context in which it is used.
Consider the example of building a huge skyscrapper. It requires highly skilled engineers and architects to design a strong and durable structure which would hold against strong winds and earthquakes.
Burj Khalifa which is the tallest building in the world has a convoluted design of lifts which helps people to reach from ground floor to hundredth floor within a minute. Therefor it can be unquivocally said in this
scenario that creating a big and complex thing is definately an arduous task.
On the other hand if we talk about computers, the first computers were commensurate to large rooms in size. But as the technology boomed and more reserach and efforts were put to make them smaller, we now witness
all kinds of smart devices around us from phones to tablets and laptops. With each passing day, numerous features are introduced in these devices such as embedding as many as three cameras inside a smartphone to
making foldable screen devices without compromising the ease of use. No doubt all this requires assidious and courageous efforts of many people working together to make it possible.
Yet another example which supports the argument that making things simpler is tough is mathematical and physical formulas such as Pythagoras Theorm and Newton's famous equation giving the relationship between force and accelaration of an object.
They might look simple to look at but their derivation involves calculations of multiple pages and solving complex equations. It takes a huge amount of courage to get out of the comfort zone and try to understand the world
around us and realise it using maths and numbers. Moreover all this requires huge amounts of mental efforts.
After considering above examples one can agree that it could be both difficult to build bigger things such as constructing huge buildings and structures and making things simple as in case of smartphones
to provide easy usability for the user.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a microchip' or simply 'microchips'?
Suggestion: a microchip; microchips
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Suggestion: All
... to make them smaller, we now witness all kinds of smart devices around us from p...
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... as three cameras inside a smartphone to making foldable screen devices without c...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion:
... things simple as in case of smartphones to provide easy usability for the user.
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...ngs simple as in case of smartphones to provide easy usability for the user.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24489795918 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73185105818 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594387755102 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5445479607 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.97078651685 282% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26866252791 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791949486976 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933256346896 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811250665609 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928204539204 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.