"Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that
research are controversial."
Solving some first class world problems and remain progressive often requires extensive research. The speaker asserts that money spent on research is always a good investment even when research results are
controversial. I strongly agree with the speaker because of strong arguments in support of his statement.
First and foremost, research always results in better understanding of the world and deep insight into things which can make our lives better. For example consider space exploration and sending man on the moon;
what once deemed impossible has now been done almost ten times successfully all ascribed to the engineering and research. Prior to that many people believed earth to be flat and at the centre of the universe with all other bodies revolving around it but now
it's unequivocally obvious that it's not the case. Research helps to uncover answers to questions left unsolved since thousands of years.
Yet another scenario when research has proved to be helpful is advancement in technology. Our lives are becoming more and more dependent on technology which aids us in many trivial activities saving time and efforts.
For example, smartphones have made it convenient for us to talk to anyone around the world with just a click of button. We can do plethora of other useful activities on our phones for instance calculations, taking pictures, making notes, setting reminders, reading
news and a lot more. Many people reproach this progress in technology as they think that being dependent reduces are critical thinking but they overlook the fact that it mainly assists us in work which doesn't generally require any sophisticated thinking
much of the time. On the contrary making these devices easier to use and more productive involves considerate efforts in thinking, experimenting and implementing.
Also with increasing pollution, there's a dire need to look for efficient and renewable sources of energy which is possible only when research institutions get sufficient funding to keep them functioning. Without money
they would not be able to continue their work into figuring out the sustainable methods to produce energy and avoid pollution at the same time. Therefore in this scenario too money invested in research is fruitful.
From the examples we saw above the benefits of research are quite obvious and I believe more and more money should be dedicated towards research which always bears fruitful results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y and avoid pollution at the same time. Therefore in this scenario too money invested in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37275064267 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76445132055 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614395886889 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2670627091 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.941176471 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.97078651685 241% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179609365318 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645939258174 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114021914558 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657159848867 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080522438925 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.