“Art does not exist unless it is shared; it requires both artist and audience.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim made above. use relevant reasons and examples to support your point of view.
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether art can exist without audience. Indisputably, the presence of the public, who will laud or deride a creation of art is surely crucial. Nevertheless, art can be exist and without public as art is the depiction of the inner world of the artist in a kind of material. Thus, I generally disagree with the viewpoint that art cannot exist without audience and I would argue that art also can be apocryphal and mystique without the public acknowledgment.
First of all, one could assert that art is the expression of artist’s feelings. Surely, art contains the expression of the inner world of the artist and does not mean that it is necessary that this creation of art should be exhibit at public view in order to be considered as an productive of art. To illustrate, let us look at the example of the paintings in caves which founded in the area that flourished the civilization of Mayas in Peru. These masterpieces of art which depicted local Gods are created by ancient artists who did not want to exhibit their creations in public view. Thus, probably for thousand years these creation of arts remained unfamiliar to some audience, yet the lack of audience does not mean that also these paintings was not art for all these years.
Moreover, sometimes artful creations are created to be devoted elsewhere and not in the audience who loves art. For instance, precious icons devoted to Jesus and other Saints have created in vast orthodox monasteries. Some of them have never be exhibited in public view as the presence of public in some monasteries is prohibited. However, these icons of course can be considered as art, taking into consideration the greatness of similar icons which are exposed to the audience.
Admittedly, the audience is a determining factor in the interpolation among artist and public. The acceptance and the lauding of public is the power who bolsters the artists to continue to create artful masterpieces.
In conclusion, the existence of public is important in the existence of art,yet it is not necessary in order to be existed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.918767507 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84852878425 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473389355742 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7623634556 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178142208875 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710379049126 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346247126449 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108598270261 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321850873414 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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