To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The topic raises the controversial issue of whether, to be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. Indisputably, there are a number of other factors to determine the effective leader, morality one of them. Nevertheless, to be an effective leader, one must think of one's country, and people, which is the result of having moral and ethical standards. Thus, I mostly agree with the assertion that maintaining ethical standards is necessary to be a fruitful leader.
First of all, for the development of a country and the enhancement of people's living standards, a leader must be moral and ethical. Because an ethical leader (instead of thinking of his own improvement) ponders other people and works for them; thus, overall development happens and people feel secure and live standard lives. Take Mahatama Gandhi as an example of an effective leader, who always thought about people, and fought for them. And, people also loved him and follow his command. Because he was known to be an ethical and moral person. If the leader is immoral, he may bring fiasco to the country.
Furthermore, a moral leader can inspire his citizens and encourage other officials to be ethical in their tasks; as a result, all people will remain away from mendacity and will work for their leader. To illustrate, Sheikh Mujibur Rahaman, the father of the Nation of Bangladesh, was known to be an honest leader, who fought for his country and all people followed his command and also offered their lives for the country. If he was not a moral leader, he will not become an effective and fruitful leader of Bangladesh.
Admittedly, there are several leaders who are known to be effective but have some dark sides as well. For instance, Mohammad Ali Jinnah, the father of Pakistan, is known as an effective leader in Pakistan; however, he, in 1947, colluded with the British government to divide the Indian subcontinent and develop a new Islamic country: Pakistan.
In conclusion, although there are some effective leaders with dark sides, having morality and ethic can make a leader more effective and praiseworthy, which leads to the country and its people's overall improvement.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... an effective leader, one must think of ones country, and people, which is the resul...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al, he may bring fiasco to the country. Furthermore, a moral leader can inspire ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06010928962 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70594449807 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486338797814 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2862494597 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310181402471 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129708254877 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816068778472 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197897573329 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957019049547 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... an effective leader, one must think of ones country, and people, which is the resul...
^^^^
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al, he may bring fiasco to the country. Furthermore, a moral leader can inspire ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06010928962 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70594449807 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486338797814 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2862494597 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310181402471 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129708254877 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816068778472 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197897573329 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957019049547 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.