The best way for a society to prepare its young is to instill a sense of both competition and cooperation.
The people are representative of their societies, and vice versa, the greatness of a nation indicates the features of its people. I believe the most important factor that help the society to thrive is the cooperation of its members with each other. Thus, instilling the sense of cooperation in young people can lead to a more decent community. However, the topic is yet controversial, and as always, it is not an absolute remedy. This essay will provide some examples in order to delve into the topic, and determines what can be called the best way for a society to treat the juveniles.
To begin with, it goes without saying that cooperation has copious merits which provides welfare for all its members. We all have the same experience that when we work individually, the mistakes and risk of making an error can significantly increase, depending on the situation and tempers, like lack of concentration; However, when people cooperate with each other, that risk will be diminished. When people learn how to join a group, and work in tandem with other parts of the system, from very young age, it can actually lift a lot of problems. The reason that usually people cannot work together is their different viewpoints or haughty tempers. But, when they learn that the quarrel is not necessarily the best way to lead their opinions, and the benefit of the system overall should be in priority, the result will be shining.
To add, instilling the sense of cooperation in young people might intrapersonal benefits as well. In this case, they learn to be patient and avoid being parochial. For instance, a person who is arrogant and very confident with his decision, is more likely to make a mistake, and when it happens, he or she rarely accepts the possibility of him or her to err. Consequently, they may sometimes encounter some major problems, and sometimes they show a belligerent temper. But people who are good at team-work are basically more patient and more open to new ideas. It will also give rise to more intellectualism since one will always want to learn more, from whoever who holds a right voice.
However, there may be a debate that lacking the sense of competition may decrease the motivations and incentives of the members of society. When it comes to race, some people show their abilities and they work better in hard situations. In this manner. it seems that once more a same solution cannot always work for everyone. It is not possible to say what can be the best way for a society to how they treat people. As a result, in my opinion the society should provide a flexible and versatile atmosphere that people would learn how to compete and how to cooperate, when they are necessary.
To conclude, it is asserted that the ability to work with people is a merit that can benefit people both interpersonal and intrapersonal. It helps societies to flourish and take more advantage of their members; however, a top-notch society may not turn off the sense of competition in their members and let the people progress in the best possible way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 528.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73701699891 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481060606061 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9160226649 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198573537381 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580163779061 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643679095601 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131019730309 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617368063613 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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