The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is
by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not
competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to
which you agree or disagree with the claim. In
developing and supporting your position, be sure to
address the most compelling reasons and/or examples
that could be used to challenge your position.
I completely second with author's claim where he states that the best way for a society is to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by promoting cooperation and not competition.
Any field, be it government or the private is not run solely by a single person. For an industry to succeed it requires many workers working simultaneously and cohesively. For a smooth functioning machine, a lot of components has to be present and operated side by side, similarly a government run by a particular party has to appoint several ministers to respectively govern their area of expertise. For example, a finance minister looks into the financial matters of a nation, an education minister overseas the academics of students and institutes provide in a particular nation etc. The above example teaches us that there is no scope of competition inside a party ruling a country. They must compulsorily work harmoniously inorder for the smooth running of a nation.
Similarly in a big company or industry there are a lot of different memebers and employeers which constitutes into running a company smoothly. A big tech giant like Google or Amazon have a board of directors, where each members of the board brings about different ideas of running the company smoothly. This is only possible through cooperation and trust which goes hand in hand. A big industrial company might have a CEO to finalise decisions but he can never be the sole member functioning in it. A company comprising of only a CEO competing with other rivals while launching new technology is never possible. Atleast few subordinates are needed and the work is only possible through cooperation.
Even in the sports industry, a sense of cooperation is well valid. For sporting events which does not necessarily needs to happen in team, a player without its cooperation with its coach can never reach his or her peak level ever.
The best way to instill cooperation early to children is by making them work in group projects, allowing them on group educational tours etc. The faster a child learns to cooperate, the better suited for a job he or she is going to be in real world.
However, completely ignoring competition will be totally wrong. An organisation might be run smoothly through team work but inorder for it to sustain in the market it must have a healthy competition with its rival and keep on improving themselves. The same applies to governments, where without the oppositon party keeping them in check is quite dangerous.
In conclusion we can infer that instilling a sense of cooperation is very important at young age for them to succeed in society in the future and bring society to newer heights as a responsible human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, similarly, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94168466523 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91481465937 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533477321814 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6544023825 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.952380952 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0476190476 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294848917071 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753339143767 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715678841338 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151717196677 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802885448364 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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