The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A true leader is the one who takes his/her team to the pinnacle of glory.
Therefore, the best way for a society to prepare its young generation for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by teaching them a sense of cooperation rather than a competition.
Current need for today's generation is availability of great leader. In my opinion, leader is the one who takes his/her team to the apex of glory. For example, in a football match a captain leading the team to a victory with good team play and organization would clearly surpass a captain who plays a game with individual brilliance. No doubt both are winning team captains, but the captain of the former team would be qualified as a great leader than the latter team's captain. This discussion is not circumscribed to only sports, this quality of leadership is required in every field. Be it a government, industry, or any other fields per say.
Moreover, the need of the hour is not only competition amongst fellow collegues but a mutual cooperation and support with healthy competition. In the field of software industry, two collegues competiting for their promotion for the place of team lead, should support and cooperate with each other for reaching that position. It would be an utter faisco, if there exisits severe competition with none of them willing to help one another.In fact, to inculcate this behaviour, management(in case of software industry Managers or above) should keep cooperation with fellow collegues as one of the criteria before granting the team lead position.
Although, the mutual cooperation is required for excelling, one must not forget that the sense of competition would allow him/her to surpass the rest.If any field is devoid of competition, then it would reach a stagnant state where it would be deprived of innovations.
Hence, inorder to be a true leader he/she must inculcate the sense of cooperation rather than mere competitive nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: per se
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in fact, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06811145511 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87292822884 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501547987616 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7856678774 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.923076923 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187377469283 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832363295561 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120492726662 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122315540304 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154199077337 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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