The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The world invites various challenges to be solved in the current generation. As time goes on, the debate whether competition or cooperation is required to instill values like leadership to solve these daunting tasks have risen. For an individual or a company to be successful , a sense of competition and cooperation should play hand in hand to accomplish a set goal, in todays world.
First of all, a sense of competition is required for an individual to develop ones skill and achieve set goals. It is known fact that competition tends to bring the best out of an individual. This gives them the opportunity to think outside the box and come forward with ideas to accomplish a given task. For instance, prestigious competitions are held all around the world by several organizations to bring out the innovative ideas of students. Participating in these competitions challenge an individual to develop leadership qualities and take on the responsibility to accomplish a task. Even though the aim of these competitions is to win, it instills a sense of leadership and responsibility that would motivate them to become the driving force of the world. On a personal level, competition encourages an individual to come out from his comfort zone to prove that he or she is the person of the job. For instance, competitive examination require students to prepare well. This motivates the student to come out of their comfort zone to prepare creatively, plan their study method, and execute their plan and to achieve their goal. Therefore, competition instills the quality of leadership and responsibility in an individual thereby motivating him to become unique and creative.
However, the problems faced by today’s world require individuals to be equally cooperative at the same time. Pressing issues like climate change, bringing peace across nations require individuals to team up and cooperate to achieve a required goal. Just being competitive does not help in solving the problem. Cooperation enables an individual to understand the problem, helps them to interact with other people to bring the solution to the problem. It is a known fact that an individual is the source of an idea. But to effectuate the idea, he or she requires a group of individuals who share the same ambition and idea. Therefore, a sense of cooperation is required by the members of team to achieve a goal and who knows may come up with a different idea. For instance, the tech giant Apple was founded by Steve Jobs. However, to make Apple one of the best companies in the world, he required a group of talented and competitive individuals. Moreover he required their cooperation to understand each other and to survive in difficult times to bring out the products that changed the digital industry. Therefore cooperation is also required for an individual to survive in a world that invokes challenges.
Moreover, Cooperation helps an individual to understand the moral values required to achieve a goal. Just being competitive may tend an individual to turn a blind eye to various values such as work ethics which is pertinent if he or she is to grow into a leader. For instance, it is not required that an individual to have all the skill set to become a leader. Just being competitive may hinder an individual to reflect and learn values from his or her competitor that would help to become a better leader. Moreover, a sense of cooperation motivates an individuals to develop a sense of friendship and companionship with competitors that could help in tackling pressing issues.
To conclude, a sense of competitiveness and cooperation should be taken up by individuals to become a driving force in today’s world. As the world moves on and welcomes various challenges, just having one of these qualities doesn’t help to resolve the task. The world requires leaders who are boh competitive and cooperative.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...individual or a company to be successful , a sense of competition and cooperation ...
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Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s required for an individual to develop ones skill and achieve set goals. It is know...
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Line 4, column 951, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...f talented and competitive individuals. Moreover he required their cooperation to unders...
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Line 4, column 1110, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ucts that changed the digital industry. Therefore cooperation is also required for an ind...
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Line 6, column 552, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...eover, a sense of cooperation motivates an individuals to develop a sense of friendship and co...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ve the task. The world requires leaders who are boh competitive and cooperative. ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are boh competitive and cooperative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 108.0 58.6224719101 184% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3274.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 645.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07596899225 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03952876749 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06467459092 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398449612403 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1053.0 704.065955056 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.91349289 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.3125 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.15625 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948292101482 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331270985984 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315910339307 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569789085549 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320281105083 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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