The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The given statement states that the society has to prepare its young people by instilling in them a sense of cooperation rather than competition for making them as a great leader in many fields. Leaders should be choosen from competion to have a durable leader. Because competition would find the endurance in the people. Therefore, the society should prepare their young people for the competition. On the other hand, if they want to prepare the young people by instilling cooperation in them then they would face difficulties in their leadership life. Those difficulties can be listed as poor decision making, lack of unique thinking, difficulty in handling their subordinates.
Competition is belived to be a proper channel to select a leader in many fields. Therefore, the society should prepare their youngsters for competition. For example, in India many leaders for various field such as Indian Administrative Service, Indian Police Service, Indian Revenue Service, etc. are selected through the competitive exam. Those exams are very difficult and it has many stages. Appart from written exams, the oral exams which is pretended to be the most difficult exam in the country, would based on how the candidate is different from others. So to sustain these situations that facing the competitions the society should prepare their youths for competition.
Once they reached the leader position in the organisation, the sustainability is important for a good leader. The sustainability quality can be obtained in the process of facing competition. One who competate with other would know that how to sustain in the competition and to defiet others. These are the qualities required for a leader. Otherwise the leader can not be able to tackle the pressure from the competitor if a leader had possess only cooperative capability.
Further, the leader should sustain from the negatives happening against him inside the company. Also, he has to think differently than others to take wise decision. These are the qualitites can be obtained in the process of competition which would required to reach the leader position.
On the whole, the society should prepare their youngsters for competition rather than for cooperating. Many qualities mentioned in the aforementioned paragraphs can be obtained through competition ehich is most compelling for a successful leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rom competion to have a durable leader. Because competition would find the endurance in...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'base'
Suggestion: base
...st difficult exam in the country, would based on how the candidate is different from ...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...re the qualities required for a leader. Otherwise the leader can not be able to tackle th...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'possessed'.
Suggestion: possessed
...ure from the competitor if a leader had possess only cooperative capability. Furthe...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'possessed'.
Suggestion: possessed
...ure from the competitor if a leader had possess only cooperative capability. Furthe...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have required' or 'require'?
Suggestion: have required; require
... the process of competition which would required to reach the leader position. On the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, then, therefore, as to, for example, such as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95396829362 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7699433391 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2173913043 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2608695652 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199010509441 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682722903242 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797546777881 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119992161573 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649167513608 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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