The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Competition or Cooperation? The debate regarding which one is more important than the other ,while preparing the millennials for leadership positions in various fields of industry, have been a hot topic
since the 19th century. While some leaders believe competition tends to bring the best out of an individual, others feel that cooperation would help young minds to become better leaders in the fast changing world. I agree with the latter. In today's world, with the challenges becoming ever intricate and convolute , cooperation is the skill required to overcome these trials.
First of all, it is a universal fact that every individual have a sense of competitive nature within themselves. Let us consider the case of an examination wherein, students prepare competitively to secure the rewards it brings to them. To a more broad perspective, let us understand the working of companies in an automobile industry. These companies , managed and run by maverick individuals competitively to produce the best vehicles out there. Therefore, competition is within each and every individual.
Secondly, just leading the world by being competitve can hinder the value of life and could bring drastic results. History has shown some indivudals such as Adolf Hitler , who was competitive inn spirit but lacking in cooperation. His competitveness did make Germany one of the powerful nations during his tenure.However, in his quest for power and to ensure that the germans were the best in their race, he lead to the genocide of millions of jews and people of other race, that eventually lead to his doom in the year of 1945. This also lead to the destrctin of Germany. Historans state that if he was cooertive and competitive, he could have been one of the best leaders the world has ever seen. Therefore , just being competitive can bring grwat results, but turing a blind eye to cooperation can results in great destruction.
Finally, Cooperation is required to undertsand the views of people. Be it a company, an organization, a leader who is cooperative tends to takes the opinions if the people with great importance and this could provide tremendous results . A great example is the case of Abraham lincoln. He enrued that he took the views of his detracters and suppoters and worked ith them to achieve a common goal. Thi made him to be one of the best presidents the country has ever seen.
The debate regarding which one is more important than the other ,while preparing the millenials for leadership positions in various fields of industry, have been a hot topic since the 19th century. While some leaders believe competition tends to bring the best out of an individual, others feel that cooperation would help young minds to become better leaders in the fast changing world. I agree with the latter. In today's world, with the challenges becoming ever intricate and convolute , cooperation is the skill required to overcome these trials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2474.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11157024793 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87281126508 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462809917355 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.6753616148 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.96 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.36 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159161077657 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365325324802 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518214416166 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949099356007 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567979039236 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.