The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
A true leader is not just co - operative or just highly competitive. A true leader is the amalgamation of critical skills such as higly motivated, has a vision, is stoic at the bleakest situations, has the necessary persuasion skills to propel his followers. These skills are developed through competitive environements like a football field. It is highly competitive. but one cannot win the game unless the team is cohesive, communicative, co - operative, stiving towards single goal and more importantly one should make it to the football team if one is to make sure he or she is in the forefront.
Firstly, competition at the individual level molds the young people to stand up to themselves, think critically, and develop the courage in the bleakest situations. Competitive environments instill these skills and it is necessary at young age to recognise these nuances and develop them. Providing competitive environment would mold the younger generation to propel themselves to become leaders through indivualistically developing the skills and seeking the need to become one. And gaining the necessary experiences to mold one's vision. Being trained in a highly competitive world gives strength as well as the strong foundation to thrive as a leader in the modern and highly competitive world.
Is it the best way to prepare the youg leaders through instilling the sense of co - operation? Not entirely! Co - operation alone will not succeed in devleoping the leader in the younger generation. Co - operation would be one of the skills which could be exercised to achieve goals when one becomes a leader and is taked with definite goals. One could contend that co -operation brings about win - win benefits across all organisation, be it government, corporate industry. It would only be useful to the leader and the organisation when organistations are trying to strive. That would not, holistically, pave way for a youth towards leadership positions.
Leadership skill is not only comprised of competition and co operation. A fully molded leader is one who is self motivated, has a stoic mindset, has developed critical reasoning skills, stands to his point for the right reasons when the whole world is against him, persuades his followers or his people towards the right vision. Mahatma Gandhiji is one the greatest leaders of all time, who with his strong vision of intolerance and non - violence, persuaded and unified a multi-liguistic, multi-cultural states int a cohesive force and followed a definite path towards indepenence. Yes, co - operation came into existence only when he was in the forefront. His early introdution to different cultures and competitive environments had molede him to have definite thoughts and he could think out of the box and think for his country. Consequently, Gandhi's early exposure to competition brough him to the forefront and he was able to exercise his vision and persuade people to one definite goal. A leader is molded through competition, and exercises co - operation to achieve those goals.
Developing the younger generation just by instilling co - operation might not be the best way. Providing younger generation with competitive environment will pave way for them to develop themselves as leaders along with skill of co - operation. Co - operation wins the battle, but does not prepare one to take up the forefront.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ining the necessary experiences to mold ones vision. Being trained in a highly compe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, still, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11003347366 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453703703704 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 903.6 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7051557347 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.038461538 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88461538462 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122557118018 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414917044719 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547441205089 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076347982373 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461465938094 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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