the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition
It is often said that the future of a country depends on the development of young people or future generation of country. To serve country better and in order to become successful in every aspect whether it be goverment or foregin matters, industry, overall development and their preparation to sustain in any conditions is very important.
Author says that in order to prepare people for leadership in government or any industry sense of cooperation should be increased instead of competion.
well I think that a combination of both is needed in order to grow successful as a leader, although it may not work everytime. each has its own pros and cons.
From childhood, in schools students are told to compare them with other student's marks, in order to improve themselves, so this leads to a competition. Like a student who has got less marks will study with more determination in order to get more marks in next exam. But this competition should be healthy, negative competition can can severe setbacks.
In industry or any goverment organization promotion is based on your performance. Suppose 5 people are considered for a promotion, on what basis will company evaluate them ? their performace or if they have completed specified targets in less time or more effiently. although there are many other factors to judge person, but these are the important ones. so this leads to competiton. employees can compete among themselves in order to be more efficient or to give a better performance to get promotion. who is benefiting from it? obviously both company and employee. company is generating more profit because of increased productivity and employee gets his promotion.
On the other hand, if all students do a group study it will beneficial for both weak students and brilliant students. weak students will understand the concepts in less time and it will be a revision for a academically sound student. so in this case cooperation works. each time you cant get your work done by introducing competition.
suppose a firm has got a big project which cant be done alone, but rather it needs a team of 20-40 in order to successfully complete the project. if all employees work with cooperation their project will be completed efficiently.
we can also other example like a toothbrush making company says that employee which will make more brushes will be given promotion. so for getting promotion everyone will try to make more number of brushes in that cases the quality of brush can be compromised leading to loss of company's profit. so in this case if workers would have worked together more number of brushes would have been made also quality would not have been compromised.
Finally, in order to become successfull in leadership both cooperation and competition is necessary, only deciding in what cases what should be used to get our work done efficiently in very important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, well, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2411.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0020746888 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88394278172 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48132780083 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1545252498 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2962962963 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8518518519 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40740740741 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149192663123 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420688330209 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581550244324 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077560432901 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731237993118 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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