The best way for a society is to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Every society or a country desires its young people to be leaders in the near future. This way a society or a country can prosper enough by training its young population for leadership. The author here claims that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or in any other field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition. However, in my view both of them are necessary elements for youth to become successful leaders.
Cooperation is a key element in every field of our lives. Wherever, you go cooperation plays an important role in functioning of our lives. Right from our personal life to the professional life cooperation has presence in order for a smooth functioning of our life. In personal life, we need to build a sense of cooperation with our family members for ensuring a better living otherwise in absence of a fundamental cooperation with our family members no single being in the family can live happily and peacefully.
Moving from personal to professional life in our workplace we need to build a sense of cooperation with our colleagues, partners and bosses. Be it any field of work cooperation is very much essential for efficient functioning in our workplace. Consider the example of a government of any country, cooperation of the President or the Prime Minister is very much essential with the fellow ministers, members of parliaments or members of the assemblies, members of the ruling party, and members from the opposition parties. Only then the government of any country can work smoothly and efficiently and ensure development and prosperity of its own citizens. Or, consider the example of a football team where the players need to have a sense of cooperation with their fellow players of the team in order to play efficiently which will ensure their victory in a football match. Or, consider the example of an army of soldiers about to fight a war with their opponents. Proper cooperation among the soldiers is necessary in order to fight effectively and win the war. In all of the above examples cooperation is a very fundamental element needed among people. Hence, in a society where young people will become leaders of tomorrow, a sense cooperation is very much necessary to instill in them to become successful.
However, a sense of competition is also essential to become a successful leader. Only, having a sense of cooperation cannot make someone a leader. A leader always needs to possess both the sense of cooperation and competition in order to become successful. This is the reason why every person cannot become a leader in today’s world. Without a sense of competition a person cannot become compatible to be a leader. A leader always needs to possess some extraordinary skills and intelligence in order to become successful and all these can only be achieved by instilling a sense of competition among themselves.
Therefore, I conclude by stating that young people in a society need to be instilled not only with a sense of cooperation but also, with a sense of competition among themselves to become leaders of tomorrow. A person possessing both of them simultaneously can then, become a successful leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Wherever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey element in every field of our lives. Wherever, you go cooperation plays an important ...
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Line 5, column 1065, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...o fight effectively and win the war. In all of the above examples cooperation is a very fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 58.6224719101 171% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2701.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99260628466 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00987449473 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.378927911275 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 876.6 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1627658939 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.04 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.64 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248375949786 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853831918037 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144216814249 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189050979303 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.209533597964 0.0667264976115 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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