The statement indicates that the cooperation is the most potential quality for leaders in government, industry and other fields, and the competition is less important. Cooperation, which means the ability to connect the teammates and bound the strength of both to endeavor, is indeed pivotal in modern life, as it can help to finish a task more effectively, while the competition also is not the meaningless. And my points of view following will explicate.
Admittedly the cooperation is an indispensable capacity for a leader. Under the condition that the leader know how to cooperate his teammates, no matter what field he works in, he can more easily succeed. The Confucius, an famous ideologist in ancient China, was he one who definitely knew how to unite his students and followers. His students, who admired Confucius's virtue and erudition, wrote a book together to record their teacher's dictums. And when we look at the modern world, there are also abounded leaders who cooperated their employees and workmates. Like the Bill Gates, who built a colossal empire, the "Microsoft", in software field. He didn't fight alone but to cooperate with his workmates Alan, and then recruited other workmates. They endeavored together with the lead of Bill, and finally made a miracle. All above illustrate that the cooperation is obviously the essential capacity to leaders, no matter in ancient or modern, no matter what field you work for.
However, we cannot ignore the importance of competition in leadership. Not only the leaders need to have the sense of competition of other teams, but they should instill that sense to their employees to galvanize their vigor. Competition always bring good things. The competition between the Soviet and the United States acceded the progress of human's exploration of outer space. The competition between the Apple and the Samsung brought us the intellectual mobiles. The competition of universities help us to enjoy the best and the most advanced education. All those is the leaders of the governments, industries and universities possessing a sense of competition, and trying their best to win in every competition. Thus, we could not abandon the ability to competition and just embrace an undiscriminated cooperation.
Whereas the competition always bring good consequences, sometimes it also bring the drawbacks to our customs when the leaders are too willing to win and ignore the regulation. The food safety used to be a topic at the consequence of some merchants competed in false way. And the global warming, the hottest topic of environment, was also because of too much of competition that pushed the industry emission more carbon dioxide to the atmosphere. Hence, when it comes to competition, it needs the leaders to identify the correct ways to join in competition.
In sum, the cooperation in leadership is essential, while the competition is also conductive too. And a good leader needs combines the two together, meanwhile discriminates the correct ways of competition and cooperation, and he have more possibilities to become successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
...can more easily succeed. The Confucius, an famous ideologist in ancient China, was...
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Suggestion:
...ed the progress of humans exploration of outer space. The competition between the...
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...ng brought us the intellectual mobiles. The competition of universities help us to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
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...ng good consequences, sometimes it also bring the drawbacks to our customs when the l...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... of competition and cooperation, and he have more possibilities to become successful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, look, so, still, then, thus, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2619.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28024193548 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12653123255 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514112903226 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 819.9 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.546516959 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.730769231 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19230769231 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13027904023 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335926175824 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361674794831 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669435359678 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208280069705 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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