To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The major cities, which are the most renowned cities in the country, are always seen as the windows for the nation to show their characteristics and enchantments to the foreigners. It's inevitable for our strangers to study the major cities when first learn about the society. However, we need to concede that it's insufficient to understand the whole society, including the aspects of politics, economics, the literature and so on, with merely learning the major cities. Other cities and villages, which seem ostensibly marginal and were less mentioned, might also play essential roles in the development of the society.
Been most studied and researched, the major cities indeed stand in a major place in the constitute of a society. A city, which can be called as a major city, must has its unique statue towards the society. Some of the major cities are the political centers, like the Washington.D.C and the Beijing city, often show the history of the country. Others are the economic centers, like the New York and Sydney, demonstrate the modernization and the prosperity of the country. By studying this kind of cities, we can capture abundant information we need to understand the society， which is enough for a senior students' homework but not all-encompassed for a comprehensive study of the whole society.
Small cities and villages, which are less known, also have the importance for society. The origins of some specific forms of literature or music are from the marginal places. Most well-known is the country music, a popular music style, that came from the villages and spread quickly among the whole country. And some of most famous writers, who altered the literary history of a nation, were born and cultivated in small villages. Mo Yan, a Chinese writer who won the Noble Price, was the best case that lived in a small village in west-east of China and created his most essential works within the setting of the village. Hence, we can get the conclusion that the small cities and villages are also important to the characteristics of the society.
I admit partly of the statement that the necessity of study of major cities, but the most important characteristics of a society are not merely exist in the major cities. Different country might have diverse situation of the distribution of characteristics. Sometimes, all the characteristics are possessed in some major cities, while different characteristics distribute in different places in other cities. As far as I am concerned, it's better to learn more comprehensive of all the cities of the nation, rather than only study the major cities, that can understand more characteristics.
In sum, the major cities are indispensable part of learning a society, but by only learning there is not sufficient. Very places have distinctive fascinating characteristics, which compose a whole society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14743589744 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02517848002 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446581196581 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 764.1 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3519100414 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95238095238 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420633991071 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122099751634 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100487137243 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23538239046 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105690954267 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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