The answers of how to make dicisions-to ask others for help or to decide by oneself-have varied from person to person. Some maintain that we must listen the advice from experienced people and never make decisions alone, while others hold the view that we should make own decision regardless of others opinions. From my perspective, when facing some pivotal decisions, we should listen to the voice of our heart and make our own choices.
To begin with, only myself know my thoughts the most. The friends, the teacher and parents, though have accompanied me for a long time, might not always fully understand us in some respects. For instance, before I entered the university, my parents hoped me to choose the economics as my major due to the higher employment rate. However, they did not realize my interest-the biology, but just want me to find a more lucrative job. But being a biological scientist is my dream from childhood, and finnaly I followed my heart and made my own decision. Hence force, I learn to decide on my own, because what others advices may not be what I need indeed.
Adimittedly, the advices from experienced people could help us avoid mistakes sometimes. But their experiences might not be suitable and useful in our situation. Once I wanted to choose a class about how to make presentation, and one of my friends had taken it and had a negetive view towards this class. One of her reasons is the elementary skills and method taught in this class. Nevertheless, I was a neophyte in that time and this fundamental contents were apt for me. I took the class afterwards and learned a great quantity of useful tips in making presentation. Apparently, her suggestion was kind-hearted but not appropriate in my situation.
In the last place, making decisions independently is an imperative skill for modern youngsters. To some extents, those who are strong-minded and insistent success more easily, while those who always blow hot and cold and depend on other's opinions may not become a leader in the future. Generally speaking, the ability of making decisions determines the ability of controlling one's life. For our youth, we may not be willing to become a puppet without independent thinking, and we should take the responsibility of our own life.
In a nutshell, making our own decision can we insist on our dream until realizing, can we find the most suitable way, can we become more independent. Thus, I strongly disagree with the statement that a person should never make an important decision alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91608391608 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84555719211 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536130536131 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4456692812 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8636363636 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167912390417 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568208478758 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116008834951 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109857967828 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932000464124 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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