Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the past time to the present, parents are always the strong backing and supporting of the children, and when our young people feel dejected and directionless, we would go back home and find the help from parents. is this really helpful for young people to depend on parents? Admitedd that the parents could help us in some extents, however, I believe we need to become more independent. And, little by little, in today, the young people could more realize their own awareness and make decision by their own lives.
In the past, the youth might have to depend on their parents, because they have liitle strength to obtain information of the outside. In the ancient time, when the techniques of transporation and communication did not appear, the young people could only rely on their parents and the local friends to mold their views of the world. they had little chance to leave their hometown to another places for their own life. In contrast, what they could do was to listen the dictation of the parents to find a proper job.
However, as the technology developed, young people have more chance to get in touch with the world. For instance, on the internet, the young people could communicate with the people of the same age around the world, to exchange their opinions and know more knowledge about the world outside their hometown. what's more, the techniques also offer the youth more job opportunities. they can e-mail to the employers or just call the employers directly to gain the jobs by their own. The world, the universe, is open to them and waits for them to explore. The youth is definitely inclined to get rid of the control from parents and to pursue their own lives.
From my perspective, I believe it is a good trend for the young people making decisions about their own lives. Everyone is a solitary individual and even the parents cannot replace them to make decisions. And less depending on parents helps the young people to find more beauty in their lives-they can learn what they are curious; eat what appear them, and marry to the one who they truly love.
All in all, I support the statement that the young people today are better able to make decisions by their own than those in the past. this transition is brought by the development and globalization, and I believe it will be beneficial for the youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, as to, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73658536585 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46995509428 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492682926829 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0677569146 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.210526316 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31578947368 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452391606842 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151056652417 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11957612159 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282209131002 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510654020103 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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