The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The topic claims that to study characteristic of a society, one must focus on traits of its major cities. I agree with the opinion.
The population is mainly concentrated in metropolises. Their citizens are mainly emigrants from different part of upcountry. since they belong to diverse ethnicity, when they shift, they bring along their flavors for their practices and traditions along. Thus, their new home becomes host to variety of delict, languages, range of dishes, dressing styles and religious beliefs.
The marks left by earlier governments and revolutionary movements can easily be observed there. One can visit multiple messums housed within district boundaries to learn about the history. Programs offered by educational institutes clearly show the valued subjects of the educated class.
We can consider the example of Karachi. it is most populous area and heart of Pakistan. Its inhabitants are Sindhi, Punjabi, Tajik, Afghan, Pashtuns, Persians, Gujarati, Urdu-Speakers and Baloch. The food streets serve Delhi meat curry, Peshawar bread and Lahore roasted chicken. The clothing markets sell Pashtun caps, Sindhi Chadors, India Sarees and Shalwar suits. The population is generally fluent in Urdu; however, traces of regional languages are easily be identified in varying accents. Karachi is host to many Mosques, Churches and Templates.
British colonial rule can still be felt. Older part of the city is house to Victorian Architecture. The locals give special preference to linguistic of former rulers. Sign boards, many newspaper publications and renowned academia have opted for English as their medium of communication. Western dresses are readily available in shops.
One can easily memorize the names of previous nawab and Mir. Various streets have been named after the former rulers. The city is the birthplace of it founder and his house has been decleared as heritage site. You can travel to his time by visiting the place.
There are various medical and engineering universities. And recently, Business schools have started to sprung up. Since most Pakistanis still prefer to be doctors, engineers and Business graduates rather than majoring arts.
The major cities represent a holistic view of various aspects of the society it belongs to. The overall lifestyle, religion, mindset and past of its people can be decipher by trends of urban centers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o many Mosques, Churches and Templates. British colonial rule can still be felt....
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...be decipher by trends of urban centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49593495935 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72591279007 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.4932671777 135% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9959575727 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.6 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 24.0 4.83258426966 497% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0507404910542 0.243740707755 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00916324216574 0.0831039109588 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0193053119646 0.0758088955206 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228303371097 0.150359130593 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239010807038 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 48.8420337079 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 12.1743820225 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.73 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 100.480337079 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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