The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
The issue that society to prepare it's young people for leadership. Indisputably, it's a best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in different fields. Nevertheless, Leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Thus, I agree with the statement that Society to prepare its young people for leadership. Its best way for them, because they instilling in them a sense of cooperations.
However, There are many good reasons for, which make you think in favor of cooperations. First of all, Society its a best way to prepare its young people for leaderships. To illustrate, Let us look at the example of In society their are many things to handle by some management team if we add our young people in team. then they learn how to cooperate with other group of people.
Furthermore, Young people knew all the new technology and they try to introduce new technology or impliments in our society. Therefor, Its young people can do manage them leadership in right way, not competition.
Admittedly, young people also learn about competitions in some conditions. To additional, However , onces they join government or industry departhment they also know about competitions. The above statement does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that cometition is more required then cooperation.
Heance, Although, We can agree with the statement that is the best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... of cooperations. First of all, Society its a best way to prepare its young people ...
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...cooperations. First of all, Society its a best way to prepare its young people fo...
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...et us look at the example of In society their are many things to handle by some manag...
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...eam if we add our young people in team. then they learn how to cooperate with other ...
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... some conditions. To additional, However , onces they join government or industry ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15748031496 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08162442122 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488188976378 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6125609659 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.645254460991 0.243740707755 265% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250718001383 0.0831039109588 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19729188846 0.0758088955206 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365962709035 0.150359130593 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.261207754103 0.0667264976115 391% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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