Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security.”
Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true.
The issue that vital to the protection of national security is an interesting one. Indisputably, governments are justified in civil laws just because of national security. Nevertheless, indirectly government are release their plan while doing.Thus, I agree with in some situations that it is good for national security but in some situation that is not good to justify. and would argue that governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security .
First of all, there are many good reasons for, which make you think in favor of that not justified in circumventing civil laws when doing. To illustrate, Let us look at the example of, some important work they are currently doing and government are justified in circumventing civil laws so may be they are face lots of problems because of this.
Furthermore, in nation, their are some different part to decided already just because safety purpose. For example, we can not start a comical factory in residency areas. because of its not safe for people.
admittedly, we can not denied that governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing just because of security. the above statement is especially true when it comes to that protect our national security. However it might be possible that faces some disadvantage in this situations, Because, laws are very important in our society.
In short, we can agree with the statement that government should have justified in circumventing civil laws in some situations. hence, we can not denied that there is some disadvantage also.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ment are release their plan while doing.Thus, I agree with in some situations that i...
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Suggestion: And
... situation that is not good to justify. and would argue that governments are justif...
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Suggestion: .
...l to the protection of national security . First of all, there are many good re...
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Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...ustified in circumventing civil laws so may be they are face lots of problems because ...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...use of this. Furthermore, in nation, their are some different part to decided alre...
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Suggestion: Because
...t a comical factory in residency areas. because of its not safe for people. admitted...
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Suggestion: Admittedly
... because of its not safe for people. admittedly, we can not denied that governments are...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'deny'
Suggestion: deny
...e for people. admittedly, we can not denied that governments are justified in circu...
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Suggestion: The
...ws when doing just because of security. the above statement is especially true when...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... to that protect our national security. However it might be possible that faces some di...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ossible that faces some disadvantage in this situations, Because, laws are very impo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...mventing civil laws in some situations. hence, we can not denied that there is some d...
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Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'deny'
Suggestion: deny
...s in some situations. hence, we can not denied that there is some disadvantage also.
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... denied that there is some disadvantage also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19615384615 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97019145128 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480769230769 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.517277896 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319608574951 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127421199732 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111425169858 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177276193277 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933418064405 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.