The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
Leadership is a very desired quality for any field, be it government, industry or any other field. We know that a boat can not sail alone; it needs a boatman. Same thing goes for any kind of institution. That's why a leader is so important for any nation. Leader guides his troops to a proper direction. The author stated that, the best way for preparing it for the young people is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. But, I can not agree with this statement.
Cooperation is a great virtue for anyone because man can not survive all the tough situations in his life. He needs cooperative people around him to get rid of those hard phases. For instance- we have finished our college life, in our country students go to private tutors besides school but there is no option for this kind of private tuition in college level. Because, in college level tutors do not offer private tuition. So, there comes the need of a friend who is very cooperative, who stays beside anyone when the other one is finding difficulties in studies. But, this idiosyncrasy alone can not grow the quality of leadership, I guess. There obviously needs something called competition.
Competition is a kind of feeling when people strive for excellence, when they want to be eminent. And, only competition can not make someone a good leader. There needs a commensurate mixture of other traits also including cooperation. But, competition is very necessary in a sense that the success of that group is contingent upon the leader. Because, if the leader himself is not competitive enough then the members of the group will not be competitive as well. That is why importance of being competitive as a leader is sky-high. So, the society should try to instill both cooperation and competition in young people to prepare them for leadership.
A good leader is cooperative because he stands by every member of his group in their good or bad time. For example- captain of a team back his teammates at any moment. And, a leader is competitive because he want to be the best. For instance- a competitive captain of a team will definitely want his team to be on the top and he will guide his team accordingly.
It is not apocryphal at all that just cooperation can not engender a good leader. There have to be an amalgam of other virtues including 'competition'. So, the society should train their young generation in a way that they become both cooperative and competitive. Thus they can give rise to a true leader.
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...ecome both cooperative and competitive. Thus they can give rise to a true leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i guess, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74200913242 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8069576184 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474885844749 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9808508853 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6206896552 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1034482759 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75862068966 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332528836599 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834693418786 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11887437893 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184084234922 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125408959642 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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