The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The notion of leadership by cooperation is a fair and better by competition. leadership is a communal effort by individuals to achieve a common goal. The sense of cooperation is the better way for government to pillow the room for leadership without hatred, fight and different goals. co-operation between young people in the society, will create a lasting relationship between young, and will be a core value to achieve any height. there is an adage that says, " divided we fall, together we stand",
with this, leadership will be a have impact on the society. leadership method with the sense of coöperation, will result in peace co-existence between one another. hatred and other non-progressive notion will not strive, because where hatred does not stand growth is inevitable. Several countries such as Nigeria, where they believe leadership by competition has seen the effect in the abject growth and many political parties with different ideas to enrich themselves, whereas countries where governance by cooperation are among the best country of the world. leadership by coöperation will lead nation to same voice, thrive together and have significant growth within the people. leadership by coöperation is a legacy government to emulate for growth of any
nation
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re among the best country of the world. leadership by coöperation will lead nation to same...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37128712871 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02909218589 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579207920792 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8036090403 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172986065605 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740776097583 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600514404554 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145827851439 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481921839231 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.