The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In understanding what makes an individual a good leader in any field, the best way would be to understand what it means to be a leader. A leader is not a person who passes down orders to others and chastize them if the orders are not carried out as he intended them to be. A leader is a person who thinks, talks and cooperates with others and helps direct the cause in a direction the team or the group of people feel as suitable.
Every field nowadays have reached a level of cut-throat competition so as to hinder the progress of all affiliated with that field and even the respective fields collective advancement also. If rather than pulling someone down to reach the top one tries to mutually step up would'nt that create a perfect society?
Although healthy competetion sometimes works wonders as it acts as a catalyst to achieve something, but it does not dilute the fact that unhealthy competetion or too much ambition to reach the top can cause a catastrophe. Take for instance Hitler, if Hitler's ambition would not have been to compete with everyone and to rule the world and rather cooperate and work with harmony with other nations, it would have been a completely different history and a less bloody one.
So where do people learn to compete or to coalesce and work together? It's the environment or the society they live in, that nurtures them and teaches them good values that they carry throughout their life.
Hence in order to create a better individual or a leader who will in turn help build better society, an organization or a whole nation, its very important that the values they are given are that of cooperation & harmony from a very young age only by those around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ached a level of cut-throat competition so as to hinder the progress of all affiliated w...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...espective fields collective advancement also. If rather than pulling someone down to...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...h the top one tries to mutually step up wouldnt that create a perfect society? Alt...
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Line 13, column 71, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...mpete or to coalesce and work together? Its the environment or the society they liv...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...they carry throughout their life. Hence in order to create a better individual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70099667774 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57774172933 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1827677622 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161289784561 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558435379625 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281157141251 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778966530414 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027818508906 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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