The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Today's world is all about competition. Everywhere we see, a person is competing with all different types of classes to make his name in this world. People believe that true leadership quality can be achieved by vanquishing others in a competition. However, the esscense of true leadership is not only competiting to each other an getting strong but to co-operate with each other. Cooperation is the quality with which amost anytohing can be achieved with firm determination and assiduosly.
If a young person becomes an adult and has the reponsibility of a task to perform in any field of work say, sports, politics, business etc, he will need to cooperate with fellow mates to achieve the goals. For example, consider cricket, a team sport, it is a very competitive sport but if a player doesn't cooperate with the team then there is high chance that the same team will lose the game. Every good sports player like, Cristiano Ronaldo, Sachin Tendulakar , etc are good team players and know the value of cooperation in the team. So, it is good if we are preparing young people to compete in this competitive world, but in order teach them leadership , teamwork skills, cooperation should be instilled in them.
Consider another example, Mr. Narendra Modi, Prime Minister of India, he is very good leader, not because he is powerful and has competeted to a lot of political parties in India to become prime minister of India, but because of his cooperative quality with is own party and people of India. If he would not have cooperated with his fellow member and team in his political party, it would be highly possible that the party would have dissolved and re-election would have occured in India.
Young Children are developing mind, they are the future of the country. If we were to teach only on how to excel on a field, then they would never know the essence of leadership and teamwork. However, some might say that competition is required more in this world and one can excel through competition. It can be the case that the child is a prodigy and is very good in adept in his field. But in later stages, when he will be exposed to reality of world then it would be impossibe form him to to do anuthing without coperation. Hence, cooperation is necessary element in anyone's life.
This fast pacing world has a lot to take and less of offer. So, we must prepare our young ones to cooperate with each other to reach our goals rather than competitng with each other
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71593533487 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60797480184 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498845265589 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1382985996 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.473684211 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7894736842 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130679151118 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446566503055 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529400875704 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738535660527 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372163133184 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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