The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
There are numerous things to be thought of while bringing up a child. A good parental quality is observed when a child is taught about moral values other than things which are necessary to be taught.
It is very arduous task to instill the sense of cooperation and competition with equal level in young people from their childhood. I think that young people should have both sense of cooperation as well as competition.
Although today's world is modernizing expeditiously, sense of cooperation is considered as high moral and laborous value in the society. Things which become complex due to competition are made easier by cooperation. Value of cooperation is an important aspect for leadership in any sector. A true leader is the one who inspires people,get's support from large number of people as well as many young aspirers admire him as their idol. For example,
Mahatma Gandhi and Hitler both had a great historic value and significance.But Mahatma Gandhi was a true leader as he got his back from large number of Indian community to fight against British reign for Independence.He was the spearhead in the fight for independence.But, on the other hand hitler succeeded in his target but is considered as the cruelest person ever lived and ruled on the planet.This example justifies that cooperation and working with other people helps a
person to stand as leader with support of everyone.
On the contrary, competition is an important aspect to be taught to the young minds to in order to achieve sustainability in the modernizing world unless it is not used for self progress and denigrate other people.
In conclusion,i would like to say both the values that is cooperation and competition should be taught to young minds in a positive way in order become a
great leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...etition should be taught to young minds in a positive way in order become a great leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03678929766 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95438715903 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511705685619 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.14531504 60.3974514979 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.909090909 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 5.21951772744 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20233035304 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761127596723 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503578887372 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877874251603 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622122922143 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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