The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In a modern world. success is always what we want to achieve, but undoubtedly the definition of success is hard to define and the way how youngsters seek for it is remain debating. The speaker assert that cooperation plays a more essential role than competition on the way making progress for success, I mostly agree this assertion. However, I have to claim that in my opinion, these two factors are not exactly immutally exclusive as an powerful leader.
It is true that without a sense of cooperation or communication, it is hard for potential leader to superior to others and achieve career success. Tasks in most fields now including science, business and politics is super tough than we suppose, so it is almost impossible for anyone to handle it by himself or herself. In this case, forming a group and absorb everyone's strength is a faster way. To be a good leader, he or she has to know how to communicate with his or her colleagues efficiently and dig out everyone's strong point. In addition to that, cooperation is also a good way to stimulate and motivate this potential leader. It is understandable that everyone would feel frustrated or even lose temper from time to time, especially when they meet difficulties. Whenever these conditions happens, the leaders' partners can play to role of close friend who know you deeply other than only colleagues.
However, sometimes it is hard to deny the role competition plays in the way to form a perfect leaders. In most situations, only comparsion with their rivals can these potential leaders find their weakness and then improve themselves. Apart from that, moderate competition is good for a group to grow and they may collapse soon without any challenge. Let's take the business area for an example, most companies who are master in one certain area would feel at ease and hard to handle any new cutting-edge theories and thus out of the touch with the world. Nokia was an multinational company on mobile phone decade ago but now it is totally replaced by apple and other smart phone giants.
Finally, I would agree that we can greatly combine the benefit brought by cooperation and competition. Since competition is always a good motivator or we say 'mirror', and cooperation is also inevitable for success leader, so in reality, most leaders just give equal attention to both these two factors. They normally encourage their partners to make and monitor their progress everyday compared to their counterparts as well as seek for help when they find it is hard to overcome a certain fault. Only in this way, can the leader wield his or her power in a best way and show the function the leader plays in a team, which is set rules and find a balance point among a team no matter how strong it is.
In conclusion, although I think cooperation is the foundation for a young leader, we still cannot overlook the importance of competition. It is impossible for me to directly compare these two factors and rank them since they are parallel in the positive form of a team and the most efficient and well-rounded way is to let the team run free under a controlled circumstance, and the leader only need to take into practice to take operation when anything emergency happens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Success
In a modern world. success is always what we want to achieve, but ...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...d the way how youngsters seek for it is remain debating. The speaker assert that coope...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'asserts'.
Suggestion: asserts
... for it is remain debating. The speaker assert that cooperation plays a more essential...
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Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... are not exactly immutally exclusive as an powerful leader. It is true that with...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'leader'?
Suggestion: leader
...tion plays in the way to form a perfect leaders. In most situations, only comparsion wi...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ay collapse soon without any challenge. Lets take the business area for an example, ...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of the touch with the world. Nokia was an multinational company on mobile phone d...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ners to make and monitor their progress everyday compared to their counterparts as well ...
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Line 7, column 556, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...an the leader wield his or her power in a best way and show the function the lead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, thus, well, apart from, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2675.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 558.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79390681004 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76501926017 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507168458781 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 841.5 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2004753443 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.590909091 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141072664811 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411905454839 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317161666847 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839634068356 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171428825213 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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