"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
Every individual in every society is willing to surpass others in his performance to secure a decent position in a job, a profession, a role etc. Human beings all over the world have been struggled to compete for better to prove their abilities to themselves. .Although vieng for better is a natural instinctive feature among any creatures on the ground, cooperation can also result in more success in many facets. But it is noteworthy that their role in different contexts differ from each other in numerous ways which will be disscussed in this essay.
One the one hand, it is crystal clear that having the spirit of competitiveness is of paramount importance for surviving every individual in every field of either study or profession. Without vieng for making your situation or circle of knowledge, there will be no difference between humans and other creatures. In other word, if you stay still in one place and not try to be more successful, it would be so hard to call you a human! Furthermore, when we compete for reaching something, it will be more enjoyable when we enjoy from the fruit of our hard work. For instance, take an student who vie for being among top three ranks in his school or college. if he reach his goal, he will be filled with a great sense of jubilance and cheer as he has made a great amount of effort to reach the success.
The other side of the coin is that humanbeings need also to cooperate with each other and give a lending hand to become more successful in the future. For example, envisage a research proposal which have common boundaries of some interdiciplinary fields of research and must be performed cooperatively. In this example, if every member of the group tries to take advantage for himself, all the efforts made by other members will be rendered futile.
It is also worth mentioning that different contexts need different amount of coordination or competitiveness. For example, the degree of cooperation which is needed in the department of marketing and sale in a company is not is equal to it's counterpart in authoratative roles such as governmental roles as governmental roles inherently must be reserved for persons with higher degrees of deceit or competitiveness.
By the light of above-mentioned facts, it is advisable to conclude that while being competitiveness is of great importance for developing of individuals and the society as a whole, cooperation and coordination is also needed in many facets although their amounts in different roles and context might widely differ from each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93518518519 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99950609646 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516203703704 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3799838396 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.133333333 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157077559983 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595919743105 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288059586268 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965694733752 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132895961245 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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