"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 58.6224719101 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 374.0 2235.4752809 17% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 72.0 442.535393258 16% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.91295063024 4.55969084622 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23270257251 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 215.323595506 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.791666666667 0.4932671777 160% => OK
syllable_count: 112.5 704.065955056 16% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.0 118.986275619 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 23.4991977007 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525972649697 0.243740707755 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.363668661978 0.0831039109588 438% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.363668661978 0.0758088955206 480% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361662989837 0.150359130593 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177991306355 0.0667264976115 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 100.480337079 21% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.