"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Cooperation leads to make a society a better place to live for; as if you can achieve every type of success if your surroundings are in accordance with your living surroundings that's why cooperation plays a major role in building leadership in young people. But, if the competition is being instilled in the mind of the youth people, their environment will be completely different from what we have expected to see for. That's why I completely agree with the prompt that the best way for a society to prepare for its pillar of the country so-called young people for leadership in every part of the country cooperation is must be required and presented through these three points.
For instance, we can have a glance over a football team if the team-mates have the feeling of competition then the team spirit will automatically be plummeted rather than burgeoning for the benefits of team performance. The cooperation between the team-mates leads to cooperate with each player to perform well and the spirit of each player will surely lead to the success of the team.
Another example, from the movement of Mahatma Gandhi, is edifying for us to understand the importance of the cooperation of the human being in order to lead the movement, he himself conducted the strategy of cooperation among every people around him which lead to successful emancipation of the British from the India leading to independent country due to the concept created by him peace and cooperation among everyone. Leadership is not such an easy task of taking a cup of tea or coffee and moving around the park.
A concept of cooperation will surely create, takes into consideration other's feelings in his heart which, prevents him from doing chicanery works, which may lead to cause harm in society. A feeling of competition leads to cause a sense of belligerence, apathy and malevolent human being in the future which will surely, going to be a devastating sign for society.
Some may argue that a sense of competition may lead to an arduous leader but it has so many consequences of making that young person a somewhat aggressive and combative type of person leading to loss to society. That's why for the proper creation of a young people, a leader must have to be created through cooperation rather than competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91025641026 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84000259281 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494871794872 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1216593972 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.090909091 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4545454545 23.4991977007 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175464204992 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724521194874 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544898253616 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965525287548 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580322037003 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.1392134831 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.8420337079 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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