Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of always telling the truth in the relationship. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely agree with always telling the truth, which is the most important in any relationship. It is my firm belief that always telling the truth is most important consideration for number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, honesty and trust is very much important in any relationship to stand for. If once trust is broken, it is impossible to engender the trust again as relationship will easily broken out. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I was in my high school, I had been in love with a classmate. As, once I lied to her for going out with her to date because my friends were calling me to play cricket match as it was final match of the tournament, which we had meant to win that match. Due to which, I told her that I was sick, eventually, I lied her. But at the end of the one of her friend saw me playing and share with my girlfriend that I played well in that match, which actually made her upset because of not telling her truth. And after that incident, she broke up with me due to the way I broke her trust telling lie. For this reason, I believe in every relationship to stand out, one must always tell the truth to make it work out for their better relationship which will be long-lasting.
Secondly, Confidence, what is always be with you when you are telling truth every time. As, we can take example of any trade company, if manager try to swindle the stakeholders then, there will be conflict between then and the confident of working of the employers will be surely going to be down due to this activity. Drawing from my own experience, during my working days in a company, manager of that company tried to hide the company profit so as he will deceive the employees as it will prevent from distributing the bonus to the employees. But, soon after, he got caught, it was shame act and he feel ashamed of himself which reduces his confident as he was looking in low spirit after that days. It’s certainly to see why truth is so much important to build up the confidence for the working environment in one’s life.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that always telling truth is the most important consideration in the relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: been
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Suggestion: feels
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52771618625 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64564631937 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485587583149 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1574385624 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0555555556 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310761573154 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11861313564 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138658623379 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292523542639 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183344816583 0.0645574589148 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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