The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leaders of today must excel in a global society and in fields that are diverse yet connected. While a sense of competition provides some financial incentive, a sense of cooperation is key for leaders in government, industry, and other fields.
For example, an entrepreneur starting a new business needs to forge connections with other leaders in the field, financial partners, and customers. A sense of cooperation allows this budding business owner to build relationships, gain advice from colleagues, and break into a new market. Cooperation with a community and an ability to work well with others will more likely lead to success that a competitive attitude can may alienate to others.
Additionally, cooperation can allow leaders of industry to partner together for cross-discipline innovations and to build on a shared knowledge base. For example, there has been recent competition to launch private rockets into space. Although the spirit of competition and attached financial incentives provided the initial motivation, it is cooperation between scientists, physicists, and business gurus that allows the lofty ideas to take shape and become a reality. If scientists and researchers hid their knowledge and achievements from others, it would not be possible to achieve space goals so quickly. Similarly, in the twentieth century, Russian and American space flight became possible through cooperation. Even though two countries were competing against each other, it was vast national cooperation and sharing or resources that made the dream of landing on the moon a reality. Collaboration and a sense of shared focus on a single purpose gave way to the first human steps on truly foreign soil.
Corporations often boast success through competition; the merits of capitalism and profit-seeking are common themes in the American dream. However, their success is only possible due to underlying cooperation. For instance, almost every high-powered executive has been groomed and prepped for the job by a mentor. Board rooms and committees are comprised of people seeking to cooperate to increase profits or output. Work retreats and challenges are becoming ever more popular.
In conclusion, a spirit of cooperation is present in every major business and endeavor, and instilling this sense of cooperation in young people best prepares them to lead the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...an entrepreneur starting a new business needs to forge connections with other leaders...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, similarly, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5068119891 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06519284831 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591280653951 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8253644468 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.277777778 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168716562715 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491862421322 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476345311076 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105784046841 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437813108654 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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