The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting yyour position, describe specific circumstancesin which adopting the recommendation would or wouldnot be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
While it is true, that acknowledging and praising the positive actions of a student makes him fond of teacher and enhances his learning motivation and experience and indeed people n general are not fond of those who keep cribbing and complaining about them, but, taking a blanket position here is not justified because teaching suitability varies and is dependent upon the student. Students with a high self-esteem wants his or her teacher to be pointing out his negatives so that he or she could improvise themselves, whereas, those with low self esteems need positive feedbacks in order to keep themselves going.
Firstly, scrutinizing the behaviour and attitude of people with high self-esteem. They are fulfilled and contended with themselves from inside and do not require external approbations to feel good. They comprehend their self-worth and do not depend on the people around to achieve a sense of importance. In their learning, they expect their teacher to be pointing out their follies and glitches. They want to improve themselves. The sole reason of them learning is to improvise. For example, Elon Musk never wants his mentors to extol his Tesla car. All he expects from them is to suggest him the scope of improvisation in his car. He constantly looks out for where can more progress be. Therefore, teaching to people with high self-esteem must be mostly of finding out and pointing the scope of enhancement and all the loopholes majorly. These people don't expect, or are not comfortable with praises and look for substantial and critical feedback from their teachers.
Secondly, the case with people of low self esteem is quite the opposite. They constantly look out for acknowledgement from others. They feel that their worth is assessed by how the people around them perceive them. Since teacher plays a cardinal role in their life, they look up to their teachers for praise. If their teacher showers encomiums on them they develop liking for that teacher and this helps them learn better. On the contrary, if they find some teacher always carping their mistakes, they distance themselves from him or her considering them to be his foe. For instance, Deepika Padikone, the famous Indian actress who battled depression shares her oinsight. How hysteric emotions generally overpower the people when in low self esteem and how she felt respite and euphoric and motivated when his movie director used to praise her. So, in case of people with low self-esteem, teacher must praise the positive aspect and ignore the negative ones in-order to make the student feel motivated and thus enhance her learning.
In sum, the best way of teaching varies from student to student. Every individual is different and his or her attitude is different and her the best modus operandi to teach him would be customised to suit him and would be unique. In broad sense, generally people with low self esteems find learning with positive praises while opposite is true for the ones with high self esteem.
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...all the loopholes majorly. These people dont expect, or are not comfortable with pra...
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...eel that their worth is assessed by how the people around them perceive them. Since teacher plays a ca...
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Suggestion: to better; to well
... that teacher and this helps them learn better. On the contrary, if they find some tea...
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'it is true', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211786372007 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.171270718232 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0828729281768 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405156537753 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.110497237569 0.0444667217837 248% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117863720074 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0423572744015 0.0406280797675 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63237388451 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313075506446 0.030933414821 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0073664825046 0.0016655270985 442% => OK
Determiners: 0.0589318600368 0.0997080785238 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0110497237569 0.0249443105267 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147329650092 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3005.0 2732.02544248 110% => OK
No of words: 498.0 452.878318584 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03413654618 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357429718876 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289156626506 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206827309237 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120481927711 0.132149295362 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63237388451 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 219.290929204 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487951807229 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 56.8040936792 55.4138127331 103% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.92 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5040250615 59.4972553346 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.92 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.64 0.674092028746 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 48.8356626506 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.15428571429 1.64882698954 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392759067466 0.391690518653 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112069965644 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.075474624648 0.077325440228 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.425460542346 0.547984918172 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134737271856 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144455694193 0.161403998019 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787866632536 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458933533311 0.385218514788 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0598696264478 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308081695306 0.275328986314 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034780451428 0.0653680567796 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.