The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
A person who gives us knowledge and guides us towards our goal is a teacher. This makes a teacher equal to God.Teacher can be of many forms-a parent, school teacher,sibling or a friend.The form of guidance is given in various forms. The topic states that the best way to teach is to praise positive qualities and ignore negative ones.I agree with the given statement to a certain extent. Every student has an inheritent goodness in them. The responsibility of a teacher is to recognize this and nurture it so that they become responsible citizens. One of the main advantages praising positive actions is that it reinforces the positive action in a student's mind and thus the student will follow it al throughout their lives. For example, the world famous singer Shakira, in her childhood, was shown the lives of less fortunate children than her by her father. When she began helping them, her father encouraged her in this and now she is a very noted philantropist. It is very necessary to encourage such type of positive traits as their discouragement or ignorance can lead to abandoning of that trait by the student. For example, in a TEDx video, a psychologist did a test on two monkeys. When they performed tasks, they were rewarded.But one monkey was rewarded a banana which generally monkey like and the other was rewarded a cucumber, which the monkey didnot like and both monkeys could see eah other. It was shown that initially both monkeys did the task with equal enthusiasm. But as the second monkey saw that the first monkeywas rewarded a banana, it started,refusing to do tasks until it was also gifted with a banana. This experiment show the inherent encouagement a person needs n order to develop anything, be it a skill or a positive trait.
Having said that,it won't do any good if a student's negative traits are ignored. They wouldn't know what is right or wrong and if in the early stage, they donot get corrected, they will continue the mistakes as adults with often bad consequences.For example, if a child throws temper tantrums as a child, and the adults around hm]im/her be it parent or a school teacher doesn't correct him/he, the chid grows up to have a very short temper and will start behaving rudely with every one. This will make him/her lose many good opportunities in life like a good job or a good life partner as nobody likes to deal with a person who has tempermental issues.
Thus, the positive qualities must be praised and the negative qualities must be corrected for the person to lead a qualitative life.It must always be remembered that bitter love is beter than sweet love.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Teacher
...cher. This makes a teacher equal to God.Teacher can be of many forms-a parent, school t...
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...e of many forms-a parent, school teacher,sibling or a friend.The form of guidance is giv...
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...ent, school teacher,sibling or a friend.The form of guidance is given in various fo...
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...tive qualities and ignore negative ones.I agree with the given statement to a cer...
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Suggestion: But
...hey performed tasks, they were rewarded.But one monkey was rewarded a banana which ...
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Suggestion: , refusing
... monkeywas rewarded a banana, it started,refusing to do tasks until it was also gifted wi...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shows'.
Suggestion: shows
...o gifted with a banana. This experiment show the inherent encouagement a person need...
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Suggestion: , it
...or a positive trait. Having said that,it wont do any good if a students negative...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...Having said that,it wont do any good if a students negative traits are ignored. They would...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...dents negative traits are ignored. They wouldnt know what is right or wrong and if in ...
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...They wouldnt know what is right or wrong and if in the early stage, they donot ge...
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...s as adults with often bad consequences.For example, if a child throws temper tantr...
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...ums as a child, and the adults around hm]im/her be it parent or a school teacher ...
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...r the person to lead a qualitative life.It must always be remembered that bitter l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76651982379 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76915612766 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54845814978 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8349194858 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.222222222 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161868751249 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521977453637 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777682520971 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926083358271 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060830370998 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.