To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement says that to understand the important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.I agree with the statement to a certain extent. The cities are where the majority of population of a region live. Indeed, the most populous places n the world are all cities like Mumbai, Tokyo and New York city. People from various regions migrate to the cities for the betterment of their lives.The cities have amenities like full fledged transportation system, various types of food commodities and ofcourse multiple job opportunities. Thus, all the latest technologies will be implemented in the cities first. One can judge the standard of the socety in various aspects by just observating how the city functions. Is the public transportation effective?How is the traffic managed?What are the frequencies of schools, hospitals etc.All these can be used to judge the standards of the society of a region.Even in ancient civilizations, the cities of Harappa and Mohenjadaro had modern facilites like permanent bulidings, efficient drainage system, well planned cities thus having all the hall marks of an advanced civilization even even though the civilization existed around 3000BC. A modern example is the city of Tokyo, where the city reflects how efficient the country Japan is. For example, the rule is that the trains have shouldnot be more than 30 seconds late, there are many 24x7 stores with self checkout, many readymade healthier food options for people who donot have time to cook. These are some of the aspects of the city which shows high level of Japanese society. There is no wonder that Tokyo has one of the densest populations in the world.
Having said that, cities is not the only way to understand the society.There are other places where perople live like towns and villages which offer a good and different aspect of a society Countries like India are agrarian countries. Even though there are many major cities like Mumbai, Bangalore,Hyderabad, the majority of population has agriculture as their main occupation.By having a glimpse, of the villages, the important characteristics of India can be deduced. The quantity of food produced, the technology used in effective food production, water,soil management etc. are developed in villages which mightnot be seen in cities.While in the villages, there might not be people from other regions living or such numbers might be in the minority. This results in the conservation of all the traditions and rituals without outside influences. Thus the true charcateristics of a socity might be more evident there than in cities.
Thus cities are a very good but not the only way to judge the important characteristics of a society. All places of habitation such as town and villages must be taken into consideration while judging the important characteristics of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20607375271 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07060139697 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498915401302 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.6481894086 60.3974514979 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.315789474 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2631578947 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14175049957 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549923193538 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891357821763 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105749180809 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155362623374 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.